Reviews for Parallels
Chishio Whitlock Hale chapter 1 . 8/12/2009
MORE! I love it! MORE!
Mrs. Lilly. Lupin chapter 1 . 7/28/2009
Hey. I don't think the ending was too creepy because James did, kind of, get Bella and Edward together and they'd been through alot with him. Aswell he did always treat Bella and Edward nicely. Although, it's no excuse for what he did - that is kind of sick and unforgiveable! It was good x
chivolute chapter 1 . 7/24/2009
tht was actually good. it was kinda creepy but somhow tht made it better. (call me crazy) good job
Jasper-is-my-God chapter 1 . 7/16/2009
your story was kinda creepy :S

but very well written xx
BRANDY0925 chapter 1 . 7/14/2009
ok...creepy!
Twilighterheart xxxx chapter 1 . 7/8/2009
intresting story i've never read anything like this before :)

Great job

Twilighterheart x
Dazzle Me Again chapter 1 . 6/18/2009
Wow. That was just incredible! Wow. Really. I'm speechless. It was amazing. The whole thing, with the flashbacks, and the ending was fantastic! I absolutely loved it.

I am so adding this to my Must Read list on my profile. Right now.

Have a wonderful day!

-Dazzle.
Elizabeth4664 chapter 1 . 6/14/2009
I Really liked this story, It really grabbed my attettion. Maby continue?
Applefromatree chapter 1 . 6/14/2009
Very creepy

But kinda good
Ginaaaa chapter 1 . 6/6/2009
I really liked this, but it was so weird!
iwantanedward chapter 1 . 5/31/2009
okay, well, that was kind of creepy but i liked it. )
smantha chapter 1 . 5/22/2009
i hope that you write more or a sequaol. i did not now that you could get attached to your kidnapper like that
wishimight chapter 1 . 5/8/2009
Found this story by doing a random search. I'm almost a little afraid to say that I liked it. haha I really like how close Bella & Edward were, even after having been separated for a couple years. They seemed to fiercely cling to each other as a lifeline, which, while only natural, was still really nice, and I think you conveyed it rather well. My favorite line was actually where Edward admitted how messed up they both were.

I'm curious to know what happened to E&B. Did they actually get married or were they just "married" in their minds since James said they were. Did they go back to their lives? What about their real families?

The only thing that I think would've really, I mean really upped the believability factor for this would've been if they had been held as kids for longer than five days. Like a couple weeks, or even a month. I have absolutely no experience with SS or anything, and I haven't done any research, but I would just think that they wouldn't have so willingly accepted it all (and so quickly at that) 16 years later after having only spent 5 days with the man. But, meh. What do I know. Either way, I still scarily liked this story. :)
Tricia dSC chapter 1 . 5/1/2009
This story got strange real quick, but that doesn't mean that I love it any less! I think the sudden transition into their Stockholm syndrome was like a light switch for Bella, and I liked how Edward was aware of it but he still felt it. The ending was awesomely creepy yet oddly romantic. I liked how Edward and Bella are married and expecting.. but it's so strange that they're going to visit their kidnapper. Oh well, James *is* lonely, and as long as he stays in jail, I guess that they'll be safe. Great story!
jewelryjunkie chapter 1 . 4/29/2009
Totally upping the creep factor with this one, but in a oddly pleasing way.

I loved this demented universe :)
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