|Reviews for Runaway Train|
| Cypriss chapter 1 . 12/12/2001
You're not the same as the WhiteFox who wrote that lovely fic about Duo and sticky popsicles, are you? Oh well, that was okay. Your writing has potential.
| Seph Lorraine chapter 1 . 12/5/2001
This fanfiction was very well wrtten! I am very impressed with this piece. It was very deep... to an extent that I barely even understood it. The very choice of vocabulary ads to the essence of this fic, and it was, indeed, a wonderful fic. Just to make a suggestion or two... This whole fic, as I noticed was writen in the passive form. The passive form of writing is a very misleading one. While it may sound mysterious and deep in the eyes and ears of the author, it often elludes the readers to the point of loosing interest. I loved this story, though, I would just suggest using a few confirmation sentences here and there, some clear statements telling just what he did, etc. I was also just a bit confused about the timeline of the story, whether one thing happened right after the other or not. Please continue writing, this was a beauifully written piece. My suggestions are purely for constuctive criticism, please dont take it offensively. :) I loved your fic. :D
| blume-chan chapter 1 . 12/5/2001
it's a really sad fic...well, sad because my Ayakun is dead, nice because Omi and Schu-Schu are together, bad because Nagi is alive instead of my dear Farfie, sweet because all of them ended having normal lifes, an well...er...kreaky beacause it's end...but it's cool anyway!
| Kaousuu chapter 1 . 12/3/2001
Very unique...I enjoyed it. _ It's not often you read a Omi x Schu pairing. I was expecting Youji of course, or maybe Nagi. But you got me! _~ Very good!