|Reviews for Choked and Breathless|
| adikakosaanime chapter 1 . 4/16/2013
What's with "Give me six months."? Hahaha.. Sorry for being slow..
Hmmm.. So much for the grammatical errors, but hey, it's the 'story' that counts right? :)
More fics kababayan! :D
| Zylanth Valkyrie chapter 1 . 12/2/2009
i'm a nurse too. LOL. those OR/DR cases are pain in the ass... LOL...
nice writing :D naka-relate ako sa mga medical terms naginamit mo.
| Ushinaware Ta Kaze chapter 1 . 1/26/2009
Okay...the whole thingy was a wee-bit confusing ...but I got the picture.
You might want to be careful with your writing next times.
But heck a nice theme anyways!
| satomika chapter 1 . 1/23/2009
same as what i've said on the other story...
but check the grammars and other stuff...
oh by the way...
it should be the lion and the lamb...
and you're reading twilight and its sequels?
have you watched the movie?