Reviews for Delirium
Eeveesloveyugioh chapter 2 . 4/9
Is that all? PLEASE, JUST 1 or two chapters more? PLEASE! ME BEGGING YOU!
Eeveesloveyugioh chapter 1 . 4/9
I saw Rare Pairings. And I know now that I have started writing fanfictions how authors feels about reviews. So here is one for you! I love that this fanfic is vaseshipping, since not as many people write for vaseshipping than other shippings. And, this has a pretty interesting summary! Like the summary, the story is getting interesting... So, was this originally supposed to have 2 chapters? Was it supposed to have more or less? If more, please update! If less or if that was it, me going to go cry in the corner and draw circles... Love ya, maybe new friend!

- Eeveesloveyugioh _ or -_-
purotekuta chapter 2 . 3/3/2012
This fanfic is AMAZING! But I think you should re-write it and make it longer. You should include what happened during the two days Mana had delirium. I know it's been a long time! But still this fanfic is so GOOD! And you are such a good author!
readerwriteranimelover26789 chapter 1 . 1/17/2011
MANA?
BlAcKoNiX chapter 2 . 6/15/2010
r u going to make another chap?
Asiera chapter 2 . 6/11/2010
Sorry I never read this before, it's really quite good. I adore the interactions between Mahad and Mana, so in character and funny.

Very interesting choice with the whole delirium thing, seeing Mana creepy was kinda scary.

Anyway, great story. I'm sad that you left it off here, it kinda feels incomplete. I'd love it if you'd write another chapter.

-Asiera
DarkManedFox chapter 2 . 10/27/2009
ah...sweet sweet...stuff... Atem does have feelings for Mana...ah...I so love this pairing... Atem and Mana are just too adorable together and they match too _...
DarkManedFox chapter 1 . 8/23/2009
cute and funny...lol... very good way of portraying each character's emotions...
FALLING-ANGEL24 chapter 2 . 7/25/2009
Whens the next chapter?
OPFAN chapter 2 . 5/27/2009
nice story~~ it would have been funny if mana stayed in her delirium for a bit longer~

wonder what will happen next~
Koragirl chapter 2 . 3/25/2009
ok that was amusing ha ha! I like it great job
TheNamelessReviewer chapter 2 . 2/5/2009
Please continue this one. Mana's delirium could start a plot where she had had a vision of Mahad and Atem dead or something. I just think it would be cool.
hanabananana chapter 2 . 1/25/2009
this was so cute ]

I love how it all fits together at the end, how the potion made people admit .

It was a bit hurried at the beginning but the rest was brilliant ]

x x x
millenniumthief chapter 2 . 1/24/2009
Aww! Atem does feel the same! Or he's starting to anyway. I love how he tried to think of all the other reasons behind her words except for the fact that she might have a crush on him. And when she tackled him...their embarrassment was so cute!

I kind of wish her plan for Mahad and Isis had worked. Perhaps a sequel?

The ending was great! "BOOM!" Whenever you hear that sound, you know Mana's around...
millenniumthief chapter 1 . 1/24/2009
Oh! A new story!

I never imagined Mana could be so possessive, but given that she is a bit delirious, it's understandable. Poor Atem doesn't even know what to do. It sounds like the Pharaoh could return the feeling, though...

I wonder why she keeps saying "us" in reference to herself...I really think they should have hidden her wand though. She seems pretty dangerous.
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