Reviews for Sasuke's Magazine
CeaShax chapter 1 . 11/30/2019
Guest chapter 2 . 8/17/2017
This was so good
cloudysouls chapter 2 . 6/30/2017
That was actually really funny
Mystic-Myth chapter 2 . 12/22/2016
4 rounds? Damn
sanghyuk chapter 2 . 6/24/2016
I love this so much!
nozomi-NN-chan chapter 2 . 3/10/2016
I loved the way they met! With a magazine, really funny, I love how they just interacted from there :)
628night chapter 2 . 12/30/2015
soooooo awesome! I could not stop smiling! They are so cute! as well as idiototic! lol
I-Love-Trunks1 chapter 2 . 12/12/2015
I loved this story so much!
ALittlePartyNeverKilledNobody chapter 2 . 12/9/2015
Great story! :D cute, funny, sexy and original, good job!
lennyk chapter 2 . 10/4/2015
Ahhhh, shit... this was ridiculously good. It was so hot i have my tablet wet :-) thank you for writing this i am glad i have lived to be able to read you work :-) narusasu is love
Guest chapter 2 . 10/4/2015
There wasn't much of the actual relationship in this fic. The whole fic was backstory fucking, with the relationship quickly summarized in the middle. In the first chapter, they flirted a bit via a crossword puzzle, and in the second chapter, the majority of the chapter was spent on the sex. There were two very short sections on what happened when they first met and a summary of their relationship up until the point Sasuke made the decision to jump Naruto.

If you were willing to write a decent-length backstory, and give a full lemon, why didn't the relationship development get the same treatment? It's probably the most important part of the fic. Do these two have actual feelings for one another? What do they like about each other? Why has Naruto "interested" Sasuke? All we know is that they are attracted to one another and that's it. It doesn't seem like any feelings are involved when they finally have sex because the 7 dates are skipped, which is the part of the story where feeling would have gotten involved.

If they aren't meant to be in love or even in like right now and the sex was just about sex and not feelings, then okay, my bad. But if you wanted it to seem like there's feelings, then you have to show it. You can't just tell us Sasuke finds Naruto interesting without showing it first.
Guest chapter 2 . 10/3/2015
Daaaaayyyyym! Three more?! XD
Guest chapter 2 . 7/3/2015
And Sasuke locked Naruto away never to be seen again
Kays3r chapter 2 . 6/20/2015
Oh... Mah... Gawd.

That was so hot. I love seme Naruto :3 NaruSasu ftw! Lmao
Guest chapter 2 . 5/28/2015
I love this! It's super good and cute!
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