Reviews for For the Potions Master's Amusement
LJKBananagirl chapter 86 . 5/21
I've done nothing but read this story for the last 48 hours. I've really enjoyed it, thank you!
Guest chapter 86 . 5/10
An interesting story. I will admit that I skimmed/skipped all the sex. Normally even half the the amount a sex stuff would have had me walking away. But your take on the characters was was so interesting that I had to say and read the whole thing. The quality of your writing never suffered so that was nice. sometimes it felt like you were using this story to give an exposition on D/s life. Which leads me to the fact I was bothered by how "helpless" the women as a group seemed. As I am not part of the culture I not really position to judge. Over all thank you for writing this.
guest chapter 1 . 5/6
you know that there isn't a chapter 8 right
Luvicar chapter 4 . 5/6
It's probably no longer encouraging (as you have finished the story already), but you write beautifully and speak to a very compelling dark side that I find in myself :)
Guest chapter 4 . 4/30
AMAZING!
dragoon109 chapter 1 . 4/22
um we dont know if his hair is actually greasy.
deliciousflowerfire chapter 85 . 4/18
love
deliciousflowerfire chapter 14 . 4/18
Sweet !
deliciousflowerfire chapter 12 . 4/18
3
deliciousflowerfire chapter 9 . 4/17
Yeez I do not hate him right now ! :) He 's mostly right! Only thing I do Hate is him seeing another woman! But he is right in doing this to her.

Great writing, by the way.
deliciousflowerfire chapter 8 . 4/17
this chapter is moving
Guest chapter 86 . 4/12
It took me 3 days to read this. I got so confused halfway through and you seemed to keep saying the same thing which got a bit boring. It was good don't get me wrong but maybe next time write one that's shorter.
Cara chapter 30 . 4/11
Fuck a duck- that is brilliant!
this girl snape keeps seeing is starting to piss me off. It's quite 50 shades eh? Miss smith can be Mrs Robertson!
Really enjoying it its amazing!

I'll fave this story when I log on: CoralPotion
random reader chapter 86 . 3/16
I think for a long time reading this I really hated their relationship. I was rooting and waiting for the day when Hermione would wake up, come to her senses, and fling that fucking collar in his face. How dare anyone uproot the Golden Trio after all? And life is not just about sex, even if it's good sex. I wanted so badly for her to take back her independence and the spell be broken for good. But I kept reading and enjoying it. Whenever they had the mental bond thing going on, you revealed Severus' more vulnerable and tender moments, hinting at and eventually leading to the conclusion that Severus needed her just as much as she needed him. It gradually turned into a relationship in which both parties were in equal standing with another. Twas a pretty damn good read and thank you.
Guest chapter 36 . 3/4
I'm enjoying this. I don't often read plotless porn but you have some SERIOUS skills. Some of the best lines I've ever read are contained in this book, seriously I'm cracking up right now at what Hermione just said! Most of my sexual life I was involved with a rather dominant male... I wanted children so fir the last several years I've been with my boyfriend, he is sooo gentle and tender not even capable of the things I crave. This story is definitely helping me cope!
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