Reviews for Last Breath
LittleRedWritingHood70 chapter 1 . 2/8/2016
I love that last line... I honestly wanted Luke to suffer, but I wanted him to be happy to if that makes any sense. There is no couple that saddens and makes me feel something more than Thaluke.
Great job!
Guest chapter 1 . 5/14/2015
Sob... Chock
You broke my heart! :(
Poor Thalia!
Omg chapter 1 . 6/26/2014
grAce chapter 1 . 5/10/2013
Guest chapter 1 . 8/2/2012
I thInk it was Luke but I'm not sure
uchihaitachi21 chapter 1 . 3/17/2012
Tragic... :(( i really really love luke...
baby Cyclopes chapter 1 . 2/20/2012
I love it
Lily of the Chosen chapter 1 . 11/7/2010
Hey there. I'm Lily, from The Choices of a Demigod. Your story, Last Breath, has been inducted into the Thuke section of the site. :)

Your raving review: This is, in the loosest sense of the word, bloody brilliant. The style is so... flawless, and well-written. Hands down, one of the best angsty Thuke fics I've read in my entire Fanfiction life. On a scale of one to ten, infinity minus one. :)

If you don't want your story to be hosted on COAD, please PM me.

Lieutenant Of Artemis chapter 1 . 9/1/2010
After I read your other thuke story, I just HAD to read more.

.GOSH. Your story is amazingly beautiful and the words flow smoothly. Your description was perfect and I could feel them myself. Definitely one of the best stories I've ever read.

Beautiful writing talent and one-shot.

-Lieutenant of Artemis
pugfaced chapter 1 . 7/25/2010
Is it so wrong that I stalked your profile and started looking through your fics? No? K, good. This was absolutely, positively beautiful! I love your writing style. It was very descriptive and you always seem to be able to capture so much emotion in your writing, which is hard to do for most people. I simply adore Thalia/Luke. I was nearly reduced to tears after reading this was so angst-y. I love those kind of fics! This is one of the best Thukes that I have ever read. Good job.

*Definitely Faving.

thecivilunrest chapter 1 . 6/13/2010
Holy shit this is good! Seriously, I liked it. It read like a well written romance novel. Kudos to you for almost making me cry!
emm297 chapter 1 . 3/4/2010
Great one-shot, I thought you described the feelings of Luke very well :D
storm-brain chapter 1 . 3/2/2010
This story has been nominated for the Verita Award.

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Rise of Shadowmass chapter 1 . 1/29/2010
Beautiful. Absoloutely beautiful.I do not take this lightly.
deactivateddeactivated chapter 1 . 12/28/2009
Beautiful. I love it.
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