Reviews for Foolproof
Guest chapter 30 . 1/5/2015
I want to read what happened next. Please let me know if there is a later years story. Loved the story by the way. Only thing I would have liked better is more if them together so I want more of the story.
miranda04 chapter 17 . 10/3/2013
"Bells, it's okay really…it's worse than it looks"

hahaha...I think you/he meant to say that it looks worse than it is (if he's lying to make her feel better).
Scattycow chapter 5 . 8/4/2013
Could this idiot be any more of a hypocrite?
All these years he's been going to other girls to get what he didn't want from Bella and the minute she starts doing the same he starts whining like a four year old. What a prick!
Jake'sgirl18 chapter 30 . 7/27/2013
I'm definitely interested in your continued version of their lives xD
Rhea Bleu chapter 19 . 7/25/2012
What about what Edward did with Lauren - that was cruel and they're not even going to address it. I don't like weak/whiny!Bella. I like my female leads strong and sassy. Sorry!
pauleen chapter 30 . 4/7/2012
Beautiful story and I loved every page. The ending wad different, but that'swhat makes your story so unique. Thank you for sharing this with us.
Guest chapter 9 . 4/5/2012
This chapter easy horn and little sad at the sometime. wake up Bella, you have the guy. You know whatvyou'verve always wanted?
lovedavidbeckham chapter 30 . 2/20/2012
I just found this story. If you still have a few years down the road I would like to read it.
Twilightfan108 chapter 1 . 11/30/2011
ahh loved it all! pleaaseeeeee write a sequal !
melody chapter 17 . 6/23/2011
this is so fucking wrong. they're telling her that she did nothing wrong and she did. she chose jake over everyone else. she knows she did something wrong but not the right reasons.
melody chapter 13 . 6/23/2011
bella is so fucking stupid. i hate her
unknown 020202 chapter 30 . 5/25/2011
yes yes yes yes yes, post the sequel thingy. pretty please with a edward on top!
wildh3art chapter 30 . 5/9/2011
I would love to read the sort if squeal you were going on about, I liked this story it was really good.
Sanityisjustatheory chapter 30 . 3/22/2011
I loved the epilogue! Great story!
NikkiM95 chapter 30 . 1/18/2011
OMG Love it! you should so do a sequel!
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