Reviews for Passion
s chapter 1 . 8/17/2013
this is sweet and cute and sexy and i like this new side of fang. but, the ending was cheesy and a little over dramatic. re-write this when your past your hormone rush.

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Snipe10 chapter 1 . 2/14/2013
THIS WAS AWESOME! you should write more like this maybe even make it a lemon!
Myoki chapter 1 . 11/26/2012
Cool... short and sweet. Also, as for when it takes place, maybe somewhere in the middle of Max? I don't know, but that was a really cool and funny story, really well written. By the way, my best friend's favorite character is Iggy, so thanks for portraying him as smart and funny! Note: My favorite character is Fang! :)
Dei-chan-heart-Danna chapter 1 . 11/7/2011
4 words. Wonderful and well written. VERY well written, your one-shot was long and complete that it left me and others who will read this happy and satisfied.
kitten chapter 1 . 10/25/2011
its beauteful!
Fabulous as FCUK chapter 1 . 8/12/2011
cute

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Loud Disrupter chapter 1 . 6/23/2011
THat was great. It was sugestive but your sleep-deprived subconcious is a good wrighter.
myth-maniac543 chapter 1 . 1/27/2011
It's good, but don't worry... Definately not too suggestive! I think the rating fits it fine.
WayToPretty chapter 1 . 1/14/2011
love this story :D xxx
thrivingivory852 chapter 1 . 12/31/2010
AAAAhhhhh! So intense, so amazing, and just brilliant! Loved this sooooooo much u r an amazing author! And don't change the rating, it's totally fine the way it is!
Whatever Way the Wind Blows chapter 1 . 8/4/2010
oooohhh, that was really, really good, may have put it on story alert by force of habit, sorry, but Oh My Gawd, that was soooooo good.
Anara Celebvilya chapter 1 . 6/15/2010
I think that the rating is fine. I've read much more suggestive (or past suggestive) stories that have been rated T, so I think yours is just fine.

It may be a little cliche, but it was written well enough that that didn't matter. I enjoyed reading it, and laughed throughout most of it. Kudos to you for writing a funny story. Thanks for a great read!
NexusNebulous chapter 1 . 5/5/2010
Wow. Day-um, that was good!
ReErEe2015 chapter 1 . 4/8/2010
more i loved it
Michaela chapter 1 . 3/30/2010
I really loved it! oh and the writing was really good, really descriptive and poetic! (:
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