Reviews for Passion
dusk3ttex01 chapter 1 . 1/24/2009
zomg
JASPERxHALE-YES chapter 1 . 1/24/2009
please continue it was AWESOME!
pvtameliatucker chapter 1 . 1/24/2009
aw! That's so sweet! I love this!
SmartA55 chapter 1 . 1/24/2009
that was really good.

(i probably wouldnt have liked it if they had gone further than they did)
dc chapter 1 . 1/24/2009
good i liked it
Randomitis Sufferer chapter 1 . 1/24/2009
i didn't really notice any spelling or grammer mistakes. i was laughing at the start, then i stopped. i recon the rating should have been higher though. . . you'l be an amazing writer when you grow up, if you decide to go into writing. very descriptive. *starts giggling*

PEACE!
LovelyVentures chapter 1 . 1/24/2009
All I can say is WOW! That was some majorly good FAXNESS.

A-ma-zing!

maximumchrisyt
lillyxx chapter 1 . 1/24/2009
u spelled fair as fare but other than that i thought your story was amazing you have a real talent. :) good job
Babycub chapter 1 . 1/24/2009
I really loved it!
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