Reviews for A Long Time Coming
Guest chapter 65 . 2/11
I'm loving this and hope you'll update really soon I also wish this was a movie
ELEANNA1 chapter 17 . 1/8
you must be kidding me! best scenario ever
brankel1 chapter 65 . 1/1
Amazing job.
ABCSOAPFAN1963 chapter 65 . 1/1
Thanks for the update, I thought you had forgotten it. Loved the scenes especially Brenda and Dylan. Can't wait for the next update. I think it is time for the McKay family to
rogers.saundra chapter 65 . 12/31/2017
Yeah, me too. I'm glad your back with a new update.
starlite22 chapter 65 . 12/31/2017
Loved, living bed this chapter, how cool is Leo. Poor Valarie, Donna seemed really bitchy? Lol. Taking Ruby when it was David’s night and how rude she was to both of them, or has she regretted her decision and was trying to get him back? Ohh no doubt Kelly will take Donna’s side if she does.
Ohh babies?
Did Brenda ever have that chat with Dylan’s sister about why she was so upset and her confiding in Kelly?
The film set sceeens we’re great, as was the beech scene. Had missed this story, but this chapter is rocking!
Guest chapter 64 . 11/30/2017
Love this story!
Lynsco13 chapter 64 . 10/24/2017
Please update some of your stories soon. I only read you and a friends FanFiction writer and I’m going stir crazy! Lol I’ve read almost all your stories like twice lol possibly more. I need updates
cinderella9056 chapter 14 . 10/2/2017
what is he planning? I can't wait to find out
cinderella9056 chapter 13 . 10/2/2017
oh what will Brenda say
Can't wait to find out
cinderella9056 chapter 12 . 10/2/2017
shocking he already knew
love that
cinderella9056 chapter 11 . 10/2/2017
great and emotional love it
nattiep3 chapter 64 . 9/28/2017
Ohhh that was a great chapter. Very funny sexy and romantic. Loved them all watching letterman and u did that interview so well I could imagine dave saying those things. Love the friendship between val and Brenda and even dylan. They make a great 3 some as friends. Nice to see David is hanging with them. Definitely going to be interesting to see what happens when Donna returns. Hope Brenda is pregnant soon . So glad you updated this story I love it !
brankel1 chapter 64 . 9/28/2017
Fantastic.
Crystal chapter 64 . 9/27/2017
Another great chapter.
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