Reviews for BloodRayne: Angel's sin
LostLightAngel chapter 1 . 10/10/2011
I enjoyed this story. I thought you wrote the character well, just as she should be. My only suggestion would be to organize the quotations a little differently when they are in the room with the victim. It was a little hard to tell who was saying what. But I liked the idea of this story. Good job!
MsShantelNatino chapter 2 . 2/10/2011
I don't know what Contest you entered this in, but i found it pretty enjoyable. Every move Rayne made just screamed "BloodRayne" and i hope you continue, or write more like this.

And don't put yourself down, writing FanFics are just a matter of trial and error. For a rushed piece, i kind of love it! :)
mcgurrin chapter 2 . 9/15/2010
I liked the idea and while the execution could have been better i still liked it and hope you do add more chapters or do a rewrite with the full story. There are to few fics based on this game as it is.
mcgurrin chapter 1 . 1/24/2009
I like it.