Reviews for Luca
Orkslayer98 chapter 2 . 1/30/2014
Very interesting
Leo The Lucario chapter 2 . 4/8/2011
Hmmm... Has promise. I would read this once you clean up the story a bit, like putting it in paragraphs. Good job though.

Keep writing!

-Leo
TheoneandonlyKaorin chapter 2 . 1/1/2011
Is Galodraco Gyarados?
TheoneandonlyKaorin chapter 1 . 1/1/2011
Main character with Asperger's? I might actually read this...

As I have it.
CJ chapter 2 . 7/23/2010
This is looking good so far! You're reallly doing a nice job of developing Luca's character.
Rampardos chapter 7 . 7/15/2009
kool chapter u shud make luca get pregnant then die of in the middle of child birth then lucian can cry and raise her child and move to romania
angelsl chapter 7 . 7/14/2009
Nice chapter.

The thought of semen in my mouth makes me shudder though :
KingsIndian chapter 6 . 7/11/2009
Wow - you know more about my character than I do!

Another great chapter. There were a couple of things that were a bit inaccurate - but, since you're not a man, I can forgive you :P .
angelsl chapter 6 . 7/9/2009
Nice chapter.

"“This is why I love s-sex...,” I shuddered. “Ready for me to ejaculate?”" We can't control when we ejaculate.

"“Hahahha!” He guffawed. “Wow you are so nosey! Just so you know, it does hurt... a lot.”" No it does not hurt.
Bloodshot Chocolate chapter 5 . 7/5/2009
(Wow, fast update! o_o)

Ha! Nice chapter. Iggy and Luca have very...interesting conversations. XD Poor Iggy and his butt...e_e

Please update soon, as usual. :D
Bloodshot Chocolate chapter 4 . 6/28/2009
I'm sorry you're depressed. D: Nice chapter. I like your story so far. Please update soon! I think that was your best lemon yet :D

"Cocks are weird in my opinion..."

O.o
angelsl chapter 4 . 6/28/2009
Great chapter. Nice to see you finally updated.

I don't have anything to say. (in a good way.)
KingsIndian chapter 4 . 6/28/2009
Funniest chapter ever. I didn't know Iggy was like that...and I created him!
angelsl chapter 3 . 6/24/2009
I'm sincerely sorry for the previous review.

No harm was intended. I hope you forgive me.

Other than that, please update. I don't have anything to review if you don't update. So.. yeah.

Thanks.
angelsl chapter 1 . 6/17/2009
Your Prologue is a W.O.T (wall of text) which is never a good thing.

Paragraphs?

Other than that, you could improve on the plot.

Add more subplots in each chapter. Perhaps that'll improve your reads.

What's happening right now is what I call an infinite loop.

You're getting sad due to no reviews, then causing your story to become worse, which causes less readers, and less reviews.

Here's how to solve it.

Option 1: Stop being sad.

Option 2: Don't live on reviews.
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