Reviews for Luca
Guest chapter 1 . 9/26/2016
Jesus loves you and thinks you're amazing and will help you and come into your life if you ask and repent out loud God and Jesus has a better plan for you please don't waste your blessing, gift, destiny. I love you buddy God and Jesus and me and many others want you to go to heaven and don't care what any of you have ever done, we really mean it we don't care, not even if it was something "unforgivable", unforgivable is not in our dictionary I love you buddies you're all amazing and winners. PLEASE DONT WASTE YOUR BLESSING
Orkslayer98 chapter 2 . 1/30/2014
Very interesting
Speed Waggin chapter 2 . 4/8/2011
Hmmm... Has promise. I would read this once you clean up the story a bit, like putting it in paragraphs. Good job though.

Keep writing!

TheoneandonlyKaorin chapter 2 . 1/1/2011
Is Galodraco Gyarados?
TheoneandonlyKaorin chapter 1 . 1/1/2011
Main character with Asperger's? I might actually read this...

As I have it.
CJ chapter 2 . 7/23/2010
This is looking good so far! You're reallly doing a nice job of developing Luca's character.
Rampardos chapter 7 . 7/15/2009
kool chapter u shud make luca get pregnant then die of in the middle of child birth then lucian can cry and raise her child and move to romania
angelsl chapter 7 . 7/14/2009
Nice chapter.

The thought of semen in my mouth makes me shudder though :
KingsIndian chapter 6 . 7/11/2009
Wow - you know more about my character than I do!

Another great chapter. There were a couple of things that were a bit inaccurate - but, since you're not a man, I can forgive you :P .
angelsl chapter 6 . 7/9/2009
Nice chapter.

"“This is why I love s-sex...,” I shuddered. “Ready for me to ejaculate?”" We can't control when we ejaculate.

"“Hahahha!” He guffawed. “Wow you are so nosey! Just so you know, it does hurt... a lot.”" No it does not hurt.
Bloodshot Chocolate chapter 5 . 7/5/2009
(Wow, fast update! o_o)

Ha! Nice chapter. Iggy and Luca have very...interesting conversations. XD Poor Iggy and his butt...e_e

Please update soon, as usual. :D
Bloodshot Chocolate chapter 4 . 6/28/2009
I'm sorry you're depressed. D: Nice chapter. I like your story so far. Please update soon! I think that was your best lemon yet :D

"Cocks are weird in my opinion..."

angelsl chapter 4 . 6/28/2009
Great chapter. Nice to see you finally updated.

I don't have anything to say. (in a good way.)
KingsIndian chapter 4 . 6/28/2009
Funniest chapter ever. I didn't know Iggy was like that...and I created him!
angelsl chapter 3 . 6/24/2009
I'm sincerely sorry for the previous review.

No harm was intended. I hope you forgive me.

Other than that, please update. I don't have anything to review if you don't update. So.. yeah.

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