Reviews for Red Cross
Collier World chapter 1 . 1/26/2009
well done.

nice balance. good portrayal of characters. I like the way he decides to use his own background to drag out a response, even though he did that in the last episode anyway.

Still, a very nice piece of writing. Keep going!
ForevermoreNevermore chapter 1 . 1/25/2009
Oh, you're right... I do love Jane and I do love to watch him suffer. Great story you go there and I can't wait for more! You have a real knack for writing.
Sophie Fatale chapter 1 . 1/25/2009
:D

i love that Lisbon doesn't believe him!
mwalter1 chapter 1 . 1/25/2009
Good story so far. Lisbon needs to be a bit more understanding.
xxFraise chapter 1 . 1/25/2009
Not bad...

...although this idea really is overused too much. Could you try to be more original?
RutsuSatoshi chapter 1 . 1/25/2009
Hahahaha, I like this story! Please continue making Jane suffer, you're good at it.
ccoram4 chapter 1 . 1/25/2009
Great so far, hopefully looking forward to next chapter!
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