|Reviews for Build On Sand|
| Lonely Cubone chapter 1 . 1/21/2010
Crying always helps, Lucas. Just keep on pressin' on... ;_;
PK Love... it's like if he unleashes his powerful heart...
Wait... did I not realize he does that to the Dark Dragon! I'm such an idiot!
Nice story, by the way. Sorry 'bout that.
| Nanimonaimono chapter 1 . 2/11/2009
Oh wow, fantastic imagery and very, very charming narration. I love it! So this is the feverish feeling before learning new PSI, huh?
| Monty chapter 1 . 2/6/2009
Nice, I see what you did there...very good...
| Curimuch chapter 1 . 1/27/2009
I love this fiction~ I'll get one mistake out the way first
"You'll be OK, ihis eyes said. I'll make sure."
It was the only typo/misspelling in the work. Now, I'll talk about the story itself.
Normally I would have a ton of constructive criticism to give in a story I read, but in this one, I really have none besides pointing out that little typo.
This story is wonderful. The grammar is great and you have story telling that draws me in.
This fic was really great and I hope you make more some day.
| Dreamin'Ferno chapter 1 . 1/26/2009
I really love the imagery of all the PSI. Also Lucas is so cute ;_; Good job on his character!