Reviews for Ultimatum Indefinite
Rose Rain 7 chapter 1 . 3/30
(Lenalee Lee, he thinks, and then stops. There wasn't any way for him to have known that. Suddenly unnerved, he flips through his pages and pages of memory, but can only find a gap, like someone had gone through and ripped out the pages, leaving her only mention in the table of contents.)

Wait, he doesn't actually know her :O! Did he have a memory loss or something?

(Allen Walker did," Kem hisses, "Because he's a filthy cheat. Kid kept a pair of aces down his pants, I swear." He grimaces moodily, remembering but not partaking in his past amusement.)

Damn Allen! Always a cheater... He have to make me his apprentice xD

(She looks at him for a long moment, and then turns her head to the side. She looks a little like she might be dying. "You're lying.")

Awww... :( she cares about him more than he thinks.

(You should run!" Lavi snaps, his red hair long, longer than Kem's and falling into his eyes, "And you can't have these memories. They're mine.")

o so have a short hair :3 also I don't like the name XD Lavi is so much better and that shows how I'm so used too his old name.

("Simon," he corrects, and concentrates on cutting his meal into tiny, tiny pieces. Her collar is high, creeping up her neck to tickle her jaw line with black lace, and he can't look at her without feeling dizzy, like something's shifting within him.)

another name ._.

(I—" he doesn't know what to say to her, doesn't know the words that will make it all better. "I'm sorry. I can't really…control the aliases anymore. There are nearly fifty souls all shoved into one body, and until I can figure out how get the others to leave, I'm stuck sharing)

it's funny but true . 50 souls... But I love one of them.

(And the man in front of her turns and blinks down, his eye a quiet, dull green.

"Who're you?")

Another soul? Lavi... :( come back!

Great story! I love LaviLena so much *-* Keep doing you thing!
basically chapter 1 . 11/7/2013
Aww, the way you write is so pretty! :) Not a line goes to waste yet it's still so colourful. I remember reading this story a while back; so glad I've found it again.
BlackCatNeko999 chapter 1 . 1/19/2013
Oh how beautiful. Bittersweet. Just how I like it! LaviLena always makes me smile.
Please write more of those amazing stories, please.
clow-san chapter 1 . 7/6/2011
Damn! This is just great. Just great. Everything I want in a Lavi/Lenalee fiction. Beautiful and bittersweet.

I love your narrative style. It seemed very dreamy.
lavaloner chapter 1 . 2/27/2011
I've always wondered about Lavi and his duty to live the legacy of the 48 hims that came before, but you totally blew my mind with this story. So glad to have come across this.

:D Do you know of any other really good D. Gray-man fics? Any feedback would be awesome.

Thanks
Awake Phoenix chapter 1 . 2/11/2011
This is heartbreaking. And beautiful. The last part made me cry, and the line: "Because you're all I've got," - OHHHHH, LAVI. *Dies*. This was so IC, thanks for sharing. Your writing is amazing and poetic.
Shiori Dorima chapter 1 . 1/26/2011
Oh haunting... so so sad. I'm truly crying right now! But beautiful as well. Well writen and well thought out. But... but... oh! o.o *sobs uncontrollably screaming lavis name*
smos chapter 1 . 8/7/2010
Heartbreaking and beautiful at the same time...:)
Rene2 chapter 1 . 7/24/2010
You really captured a part of them they had to face sooner or later... and you did a great job in that. So, thank you alot! :-)
waterlit chapter 1 . 4/4/2010
I didn't want to log in at first, but I just had to favourite this. This is awesome! In all ways haha. Lavi and his 50 souls and his wanting to remember lenalee but not being able to is so tragic. And your writing style is omg omg omg.

Sorry for the incoherence heh, but I really do like this fic (:
Strata's Stargazer chapter 1 . 3/14/2010
I really loved this story! I hope one day your DGM muse attacks again and you might post another chapter, please?
RoyaleDeuce chapter 1 . 10/21/2009
Such a poignant and beautiful piece. I thoroughly enjoyed it, and I really, really love your writing style. It has this certain 'oomph' that leaves a lasting impact to the reader. Your characterization is also very commendable. I've only encountered a small number of stories wherein Lavi & Lena are in character, so I'm really glad I stumbled upon this one. Please keep writing! The fandom is in dire need of stories like yours! Spread the Lavi and Lenalaee love! _

RoyaleDeuce
heylalaa chapter 1 . 9/29/2009
w-wow. O-O

that was really sad. heartbreaking. x(

thanks for the read. ;)
Ningen Demonai chapter 1 . 9/21/2009
So beautifully written and paced that it's heartbreaking. The last line was just the final shot to the heart.
Crystalline Desires chapter 1 . 8/14/2009
ZOMGWTFWBDWJDWKJBDEfewjfwuef.

This is the first fanfic I've ever cried at. It's just so beautiful and tragic and touching and EVERYTHING.

My love for this pairing has just shot up by a mile.

I love this, and you for writing it. :'D

Crystal
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