|Reviews for Ultimatum Indefinite|
| basically chapter 1 . 11/7/2013
Aww, the way you write is so pretty! :) Not a line goes to waste yet it's still so colourful. I remember reading this story a while back; so glad I've found it again.
| BlackCatNeko999 chapter 1 . 1/19/2013
Oh how beautiful. Bittersweet. Just how I like it! LaviLena always makes me smile.
Please write more of those amazing stories, please.
| clow-san chapter 1 . 7/6/2011
Damn! This is just great. Just great. Everything I want in a Lavi/Lenalee fiction. Beautiful and bittersweet.
I love your narrative style. It seemed very dreamy.
| lavaloner chapter 1 . 2/27/2011
I've always wondered about Lavi and his duty to live the legacy of the 48 hims that came before, but you totally blew my mind with this story. So glad to have come across this.
:D Do you know of any other really good D. Gray-man fics? Any feedback would be awesome.
| Awake Phoenix chapter 1 . 2/11/2011
This is heartbreaking. And beautiful. The last part made me cry, and the line: "Because you're all I've got," - OHHHHH, LAVI. *Dies*. This was so IC, thanks for sharing. Your writing is amazing and poetic.
| Shiori Dorima chapter 1 . 1/26/2011
Oh haunting... so so sad. I'm truly crying right now! But beautiful as well. Well writen and well thought out. But... but... oh! o.o *sobs uncontrollably screaming lavis name*
| smos chapter 1 . 8/7/2010
Heartbreaking and beautiful at the same time...:)
| Rene2 chapter 1 . 7/24/2010
You really captured a part of them they had to face sooner or later... and you did a great job in that. So, thank you alot! :-)
| waterlit chapter 1 . 4/4/2010
I didn't want to log in at first, but I just had to favourite this. This is awesome! In all ways haha. Lavi and his 50 souls and his wanting to remember lenalee but not being able to is so tragic. And your writing style is omg omg omg.
Sorry for the incoherence heh, but I really do like this fic (:
| Strata's Stargazer chapter 1 . 3/14/2010
I really loved this story! I hope one day your DGM muse attacks again and you might post another chapter, please?
| RoyaleDeuce chapter 1 . 10/21/2009
Such a poignant and beautiful piece. I thoroughly enjoyed it, and I really, really love your writing style. It has this certain 'oomph' that leaves a lasting impact to the reader. Your characterization is also very commendable. I've only encountered a small number of stories wherein Lavi & Lena are in character, so I'm really glad I stumbled upon this one. Please keep writing! The fandom is in dire need of stories like yours! Spread the Lavi and Lenalaee love! _
| heylalaa chapter 1 . 9/29/2009
that was really sad. heartbreaking. x(
thanks for the read. ;)
| Ningen Demonai chapter 1 . 9/21/2009
So beautifully written and paced that it's heartbreaking. The last line was just the final shot to the heart.
| Crystalline Desires chapter 1 . 8/14/2009
This is the first fanfic I've ever cried at. It's just so beautiful and tragic and touching and EVERYTHING.
My love for this pairing has just shot up by a mile.
I love this, and you for writing it. :'D
| There Was A Silence chapter 1 . 6/29/2009
Oh god... that was only one of the most effing depressing and beautiful things I have ever read... ouch... that pairing is so tragic and beautiful... good job...