|Reviews for Clive, My Old Driving Instructor|
| MJ MOD chapter 1 . 6/23/2013
omg! poor clive! i'm sure he'll need therapy now. maybe he'll suffer from post traumatic shock; the kind people who have seen combat gets. he'll never be able to give driving lessons now. poor, poor man...
| TheImaginationAddict chapter 1 . 5/27/2013
Rofl! Well *that'd* have taught Mr. I've-Seen-Every-Driving-Mishap-You-Can-Think-Of Clive a thing or two! ;) This is first-class writing - thanks for sharing! :)
| rapidreader66 chapter 1 . 1/7/2013
I absolutely love it! You wrote in the same tone as written in the books, and that gave it a personal touch. I could imagine it as a back cover special! Great job!
| Whispers in the Dawn chapter 1 . 10/30/2012
i'm still laughing.
| Princess Sammi chapter 1 . 7/11/2011
I bow down to your talent really I do!
That was just so incredibly well written that it could practically have fitted very nicely into one of the books.
It matched Sophie's style spot on!
I could picture the whole scene in my head and it was utterly hilarious.
I loved the bit about her choice of footwear for the driving. It reminds me of that bit in Shopaholic Takes Manhattan/Shopaholic Abroad when Becky tells Luke she's had her brand new clementine sandals for ages and they are actually her 'driving shoes'Lol
Aww, I too would be mourning my broken shoe Bex ;)
And the ending was a cracker.
'So, do I pass?'
Does she pass?
Oh My God!
*collapses in a fit of hysterics once more*
Brava my dear! I am definitely adding this to my favourites and will definitely be re-reading it in the future when I need a bit of cheering up.
And it can keep me going until Sophie hopefully brings out a new Shopaholic novel.
P.S I agree, it's such a lonely little section and more fics are definitely needed *hint hint*. The film was good, but NOTHING can ever top the books in my opinion.
| chini chapter 1 . 6/16/2011
Hahaha... good one! It's nice to know that there are people ( even if they're fictitious) who are worse than me. When I had to turn the car the first time I was driving, I accidently hit the accelerator, and just stopped the car from hitting a passing motorbike. God, it was bloody scary! :)
| Lissy chapter 1 . 6/10/2011
When I read about Clive, her old driving instructor I was wondering about the story behind that!
And you deserve every single one of the reviews you got; great job recreating Becky! Very wonderfully written and 5 stars for originality as well staying true to the original series!
| Ailish Oriana chapter 1 . 12/28/2010
I thought it was pretty good. :) Though,the idea was a bit cliche to be quite honest, especially the last line. Also, there were some grammatical errors you might wanna look into. I'm no expert on that area either, but i find rereading eliminates most of these errors. Most importantly, Becky seemed a bit out of character. All that swearing for one thing and the way she called Clive, a "git". :P
All in all, your effort is commendable. and I'm glad you wrote this. Plus I absolutely agree with you; there should definitely be e-mails sent, to inform people about this category. XD
| xchic chapter 1 . 11/1/2010
Oh my god, this was wonderful !I am seriously considering whether your sophie kinsella. Or maybe even becky, reaching us from the fictional world. Either way, I love it. really autentic
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| jediahsokaroxx chapter 1 . 8/11/2010
lol, I defintely enjoyed it, it was hilarious(in a good way)!
Especially the last line, it so got me :D
| SummerWrites chapter 1 . 5/3/2010
I thought it was okay. I love the humor and the obvious attempt in creating a Becky in your story. Though there were points that I did not feel her saying some of the lines. It just does not suit her. But all in all it was great! And I commend you for a good job. :) I have read and watched every Shopaholic Series and I must say, I know every character by the heart, if you do not mind me saying. God Bless :)
| hannah chapter 1 . 4/1/2010
it's good. becky really sounded like how kinsella would have written. awesome )
| Conan-Ai chapter 1 . 2/18/2010
It's really good! You really sound like Becky! ;D
| becky luke rock my socks chapter 1 . 11/24/2009
you should write one with luke in it i love him oh yummy!