|Reviews for Simple Worries|
| Anea the Morwinyon chapter 1 . 1/30/2014
| Mooseymoose chapter 1 . 1/27/2012
Ok, seriously? Don't listen to what those horrible reviewers are saying. They're just being mean. Yes, the writing wasn't fantastic, but you got your point across and I thought it was very cute. I am a huge fan of this movie, and a hardcore shipper of Jim/Selena, but I didn't feel like this was a betrayal of their relationship, or child abuse, for that matter. That's just a ridiculous accusation. This wasn't a romantic story. It's ok for Hannah to have a crush on Jim, that's normal, and it's not like it's unheard of for an older guy (and Jim was what, like, 20? And Hannah was about 14, not that much younger) to be nice enough to do that for her. It was slightly cliche, but I thought it was cute.
| Harley-Jensen chapter 1 . 3/15/2010
Aw how adorable! I loved it. It put a smile to my face haha
| Elodie the Scribe chapter 1 . 12/30/2009
Jim is in love with Selena. Jim, a grown man, would not kiss a teenage girl. Your grammar and writing needs work. Also, spouting "no mean reviews!" in your summary only attracts us. ;)
| TheLastChronicler chapter 1 . 10/27/2009
Okay, first off the bat, there's no description, the lines just run almost the same as a transcript (that's not good, by the way).
Secondly, the dialogue itself is out of character. Jim just asks to kiss Hannah, despite the fact that he's (apparently) in love with Selena? He has no thoughts on the fact that he's committing child abuse? No sense of guilt for her father's sake? I'm not saying that its not possible to have romantic fluff between the two of them, but it would have to be handled very carefully.
Lastly, and perhaps most importantly, if 'mean' reviews are unwelcome, you have no business writing fiction. Constructive criticism is how writers improve. If you can't handle that, you shouldn't be writing at all.
| I Am the Batman Dag Nab It chapter 1 . 9/18/2009
Aw! I can't stop smiling!
A little cheesy, Yes. But
very cute none the less.
| Kyra chapter 1 . 8/31/2009
Simple and effective. Very cute.
| gerardlover123 chapter 1 . 7/3/2009
hehe. That was adorable! Please write more Jim/Hannah stories!
| sophietofu chapter 1 . 6/14/2009
While it's a cute concept, it was executed poorly with uncharacteristic forced dialogue and minimal description. General sentence structure is unappealing as well.
Also, this exact type of fluff has been done before, and better.
| WelcomeToMyLife11 chapter 1 . 3/16/2009
haha, I ejoyed this:D
| CarsonandMrs.Hughes4ever chapter 1 . 2/16/2009
A great story. Very funny.
| DivineSynder chapter 1 . 2/9/2009
That was really cute. I liked hannah's character and wished they had done more with her. Great job!
| Alana84 chapter 1 . 1/31/2009
Awe, that was cute!
| The Ninth Layer chapter 1 . 1/28/2009
Who taught you how to write? A drunken two-year-old?
This steaming heap of garbage could be written by an illiterate illegal immigrant and still be better.
Please, delete this and pray to your deity for forgiveness.