harry's banter is childish. and very, very, repetative

big mouth, no action. Like a child he promises revenge but the revenge is some petty act. NOT WORTH IT !

harry talks too much.

Le comte de Monte Cristo

Really awesome story!

Damn, overall a really sad story, wonderful and yet, heartbreaking

enjoy the story, and this is my second or third read through, but i would see the 17/18 argument more as a "while you live under my roof you live by my rules!" type argument from a harpy like molly... (completely ignoring the fact that has been highlighted in many other fanfics that they weren't under HER roof at the time) the twins may have been 17 at the beginning of OOTP but still hadn't graduated or moved out until after the umbridge fireworks spectacular... either way, good stuff... (also dumbles probably would allow others of their age just not molly's kids for fear of howlers in person)

Started good but fizzled out pretty quickly, especially boring were those Fudge chapters ..

Oh poor McGonagall, that ice is getting thicker, not thawing. Those bridges were burned, the debris vanished and the rivers turned into oceans.

Once school is over, the Potters will disappear from the Wizardijg world, and you'll be left with a dying society of morons and criminals.

yhe count of mounte cristo right

While not the worst story I've read...it's up there. I was hoping for a kick ass harry, and we got a whining boy with no spine to follow through. Nothing really happened...the entire story. I could pick it apart but honestly I don't care enough. Just disappointed

the count of monte cristo.

merlin aint a second coming of christ is hubis and we are not god

That just shows how stupid you are! Edmund is the Count of Monte Cristo!

bit childish but an ok read