Reviews for Do Not Meddle In The Affairs Of Wizards |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Having snape make all the wolfbane potions seems unrealistic and logistically impossible |
![]() ![]() ![]() You call this a filler chapter in the authors note for some reason beyond my understanding. This chapter captures Harry, as he is at this time, perfectly. It is in my opinion one of the best, if not the best, chapters in this work. |
![]() ![]() You need an epilogue to know what happened |
![]() ![]() ![]() That's what Azkaban does to people |
![]() ![]() ![]() "As he sat back down, Harry couldn't help wondering which of his enemies would reach him first the Order or the Deatheaters." Do you not proofread? This is hardly an optimistic start. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Since I do not know the English title I'll go with the German one: Der Graf von Monte Christo |
![]() ![]() ‘His eyes bored into Mrs. Weasley's as he commented. "I wonder how many people your son tortured and killed madam, besides Neville and me, I mean." "Neville and I," Hermione corrected automatically, earning another glare from Harry.’ In this case, Hermione is wrong. “I” is for the subject, “me” for the object. As it was Harry and Neville being tortured, rather than being the torturer, they are the object and the correct form is “Neville and me.” |
![]() ![]() ![]() really enjoyed this story |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was one of the darkest, most messed up stories I've read in a while, and I loved every chapter. Well done, mate. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Clothes are fine. Though, if I’d want to annoy them even further, I’d legally change name to something like Liland Jameson Riddle and force everyone to use it. |
![]() ![]() Not evil, just pathetic. |
![]() ![]() ![]() For as weird as this story is(to me anyway), it's pretty good... I will say that everyone is a bit out of character aside from Harry, and that goes triple for Ginny, because it's not even remotely what even an OOC Ginny (or her family, besides Gred and Forge) would act like, in my opinion... Even though I like the story it's that one part of the plot I find hard to believe would happen, of perhaps it's merely something like that part of the plot not making sense |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like this Harry! He’s not dark like torturing people but he has a strong sense of self and does not give two shits which I looovvee! In canon the majority of the Wizarding world abandons him/turns a blind eye/scape goats him etc including Ron. But Hermione stays by his sidealways. But I can see understand why you portray her as such. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love it! Really enjoyed reading it, thank you for sharing it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Quite an in-depth revenge fic covering many aspects without being boring about it. Thanks for writing! |