Reviews for Abandon
Maz Kazama chapter 7 . 2/8/2009
Aw, I loved John in this! I was half-expecting Sam to notice that he was being followed but in a way I'm glad he didn't because he'd totally get the wrong idea.

And poor Dean, what you wrote is so true about Dean on the show as well as Dean in the fic. He really doesn't have anything but hunting...
JenF chapter 7 . 2/8/2009
Yep, really enjoying this story. I can just see John checking on Sam without letting on - too much pride in that man! And Dean finding solace in a one night stand - absolutely what he'd do.

Loving this :)
casammy.armoasantander019gmai chapter 7 . 2/7/2009
encantador john cuidando que sammy este siempre a salvo y seguro, perfect, ahora no estaría nada mal q le llegue el turno a dean de cuidar y proteger a su baby bro, supongo lo aburrida que fue la vida de sam en satanford, estudio, tareas, noviasgo, así que mucho no hay después la historia ud va encaminar a los hechos de que pasaron los años y dean buscando a sam y llevandolo de vuelta con él a la carretera y a la caza? estoy intrigada hacia donde va la historia
masondixon chapter 7 . 2/7/2009
You give such depth to the characters- all of them. And give them so much life without having to use alot of action or even much dialogue. Your description of their thoughts paints such a vivid picture that goes beyond a physical sense and brings so much more dimension to each of them. It is a joy to read your words. Each chapter is like a gift-wrapped package that is a joy to open. I look forward to your next chapter here and, I ask greedily, I admit, if you have another chapter of Reality Check coming up? I miss that story.

Thank You.
deangirl1 chapter 7 . 2/7/2009
I loved John's reflection that black wasn't always a good choice... nicely ironic... Poor Dean - already hitting the bars - I'm wondering how having only one kidney is going to affect his drinking ability... I'm curious to see what he does next if he thinks that he can't hunt alone...
ladie red chapter 6 . 2/7/2009
Ah, those Winchester's...why is nothing ever simple for them? We have John' s angst about his sons, Sam's angst at starting again without his family and Dean's angst at, well, dude, it's Dean, regardless of the pain induced delirium, we all know that their are way too many layers of inner angst behind that handsome face. Our poor boys. Love it.

Also, I'm going to be that niggling voice at the back of your head that spurs you on with Reality Check and A Home of Sorts. But trust me, I know how hard it is to balance more than one multi-chaptered fic, so this is not an impatient growling, far from. This is a casual mention, a boost, cause I love you writing and want more!

Lolz, peace out.
casammy.armoasantander019gmai chapter 6 . 2/5/2009
sam es tan testarudo y orgulloso que no quiere admitir que ama tanto a su big bro que lo extraña a morir, ssiempre enfadandose con su familia, pero a pesar de ser tan obstinado idiota su dad y su big bro estan pendientes de él, ponga en su historia, el control de john y dean sobre sammy durante sus 4 años en stanford para saber que el niño siempre está a salvo, estoy segura que incluso dean se las habrá ingeniado para tener a alguien sobre sammy echandole un ojo siempre y darle aviso, en forma inmediata si había algún peligro rondando a baby bro, tenga en cuenta estas ideas, please, me gusta tanto dean sobreprotector, después de todo dean siempre ha sido realmente el padre de sam, más que un bro, espero su actualización
doyouqueue chapter 6 . 2/5/2009
oh wow. *cringe*

poor dean, and sam for taking it all so wrong...

no words for how much i love this chapter :D i feel like we've just begun the make-dean-feel-like-utter-crap-coz-of-sammy-n-daddy part of pre-series Stanford era. i love it :D:D!

and the thought that this is going to be a series makes me feel all fuzzy and happy inside...

got my last final tomorrow :S wish me well, i haven't studied crap yet, too busy reading this which is so much more fun

god i'ma gonna . :(

and the mayonaise story is hilarious, i had something similar with a cousin of mine over eye-liner. i'm sorry to say that i was the one that went gaga... ahem. but we do not speak of those dark dark times :P.

very excited about the next chapter!
deangirl1 chapter 6 . 2/5/2009
I really like how much you have packed into this chapter... nice reflections on John and Sam - but too bad that Sam is always more than ready to think the worst of Dean... He might wonder at what he's stoned on...
Zerestor chapter 6 . 2/5/2009
Good little story you've got going here.

zx
masondixon chapter 6 . 2/5/2009
Following the pattern: Another Good Chapter.

Love the switches between Sam and Dean and I like that rather than breaking whole chapters up to each. Keeps them "together" even when they are apart. And I love the Dean h/c so I hope you will continue. Glad to know there is lots more of this series to come. Look forward to chapter You.
masondixon chapter 5 . 2/3/2009
As always, a very good chapter. Loved the flashback to when Sam and Dean were little ones; I could see them before my eyes. Loved the way little Sam had trouble pronouncing words. My little Samuel went for nearly a year pronouncing just about every word with an "f" at the end of it. Tooth was "toof" and Please was "pleaf". We worried for a short while that he might have a speech impediment but we couldn't help but laugh to ourselves as we listened to his conversations. We are now done with our "f" phase and he now speaks like a proper little 6-year-old but I thought of him when I read your little Sam's dialogue here. Enjoyed the Dean h/c and would not mind more at all in the near future. Look forward to your next chapter. Thank You.
Sofia2007 chapter 5 . 2/3/2009
Hi,

I like Pre-Series Stories and this one is really describe nice how Sam struggles with his "date" and small best was your weechester part, Sam's comment about Johns lady friend :Do you think that lady just kicked Daddy to help him get rid of his Smurf disease? ‘Cos she sounds awfully unhappy.”giggel...

But also the Scene at Bobby's was good I hope you update soon
doyouqueue chapter 5 . 2/3/2009
eekh!

m, i love dean in pain. that was extremely intense. i absolutely loved it. and the fact that sam has no clue what is going on is present as well in our minds.

who called sam btw? i bet it was pastor Jim... oh and i am so glad you brought pastor Jim into the fray as well!
deangirl1 chapter 5 . 2/3/2009
I can't imagine having to keep something like that down! EW! Nice wee!chester flashback - so sweet - and I loved Dean teasing John about who he'd been bangin! I hope that John stays in protective mode, but I get the feeling once Dean isn't dying, John is going to go back to drill sargeant and not be too happy...
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