I love the way you built the story...I would have loved to read more!

This was amazing. The detail, the moments , the depth and flow of this piece.

So poignant!

Carpetfibers, you've got a gift. This kind of insight into humanity is a rare find on a fan fiction site. Thank you for sharing your gift. I will be watching out for more stories from you.

Very sweet story! Wow, she's such a stubborn and fiery one, isn't she!

beautiful :-)

Oh! I really liked this, its was so sweet!

This is beautiful :)

Brilliant. The interactions, the conversations, the sheer depth and detail of the characters was just amazing. Everything just fit together, and even though we just get pieces of a timeline the story is perfectly clear while at the same time left open to the imagination. Absolutely amazing.

Amazing. Very poetic, and very in-character, and I just love the way their relationship progresses. Happenstance, indeed.

this is lovely. excellent work. :)

Woo :) This is brilliant. I really enjoyed it! I've been on a DracoHermione lull but I think it just got reignited :)

Absolutely lovely.

And I agree with your author's note, I love the disjointed effect of it, it really gives a sense of passing time, I guess.

I never really considered Hermione and Draco together, but your story has got me liking them more than I like the Hermione/Ron pair. It's all completely your fault. Anyway, I enjoy your writing style and I hope to see more stories from you soon. Good Luck!

so cute:)