Reviews for The Rose
TexannaRose chapter 6 . 7/28/2009

smackedfan454 chapter 6 . 7/14/2009
cute. i like it. :)
shewhorunswithvampires chapter 6 . 6/18/2009
aw yea do a follow up on this! it was so cute! i love it! absolutly fantastic! .

Team Edward/smacked forever! 3 Allie
Hazmatt chapter 6 . 6/2/2009
Adorable story! I really enjoyed it! Perfect! Is there going to be a sequel?
Hazmatt chapter 5 . 6/2/2009
That was so cute! I really enjoyed it!
Hazmatt chapter 4 . 6/2/2009
Very cute! I really enjoyed it! She's figured it out hasn't she?
Hazmatt chapter 3 . 6/2/2009
Wonderful chapter! I really enjoyed it!
Hazmatt chapter 2 . 6/2/2009
I enjoyed that! I like this story! It's very cute!
Hazmatt chapter 1 . 6/2/2009
Cute chapter! I really enjoyed it!
mb20fan chapter 6 . 5/2/2009
chrysalis escapist chapter 6 . 4/27/2009
Yikes, sorry I'm so late, no idea where the time went ...

Well, I loved reading this, a beautiful last chapter for a lovely story.

I loved Stella pondering about whether she should meet him or not, very much in character, I think. Loved 'Can take my gun with me for protection..' :). And I loved how she kept wondering if it might be Mac, somehow unable to, but somehow maybe wanting it to be him.

Loved that you had Mac's POV in this chapter too, and that you didn't give his name at first, but hints like him drinking coffee and the tie, that was well done.

And I loved how you then connected the two points of view with her feeling someone looking at her and him seeing her get out of the taxi, her shaking her head, and him seeing it ...

And I loved how both their heartbeats quickened :) and how they were both shy, that was so sweet!

And again I loved how you worked with the different kinds of smiles, grins, and laughs - that made me smile too :).

Loved this line, very beautiful 'then I see something in his eyes, a reflection of my own feelings in his eyes'. I loved how e brushed away the tear, that was a very tender moment that you captured beautifully.

And I love it when their foreheads touch!

Really liked that you didn't forget about how the team found out.

And I wholeheartedly agree that this particular Valentine's Day 'Couldn't have been better than that..'

It would be lovely to see a sequel to this.
BlueEyedAuthor chapter 6 . 4/7/2009
oh yes please write a sequel!
dadoinkdoink chapter 6 . 4/2/2009
Great job! Loved the story!

I am sad to see it over. I hope that you do a follow up story to this one!

Can't wait for more of your SMacked stories!

:D Doink Doink
sterra-kyra chapter 6 . 4/2/2009
this is so awesome chapter! mac!
xXBoulevard-of-Broken-DreamsXx chapter 6 . 4/1/2009
I liked your story! And yes a follow up would be great! PLZ PLZ PLZ?
62 | Page 1 2 3 4 .. Last Next »