|Reviews for Addicted|
| top story chapter 8 . 8/25
Everyone seems to forget the human side
| TheaterGirl09 chapter 16 . 7/11/2012
I ABSOLUTLEY LOVED THIS STORY. IT WAS AMAZING. I WILL SAY IT AGAIN I LOVED THIS STORY! I loved how nessie was being stubborn and fought for what she believed. I loved how Jacob always made sure that nessie was safe. I loved everything about this story.
| AmaraMikael chapter 16 . 6/23/2011
This was such an amazing story... I really loved reading every minute of it!
| luv2beloved chapter 16 . 3/23/2010
This was very good I would have enjoyed a Running N/J as well!
| Kiowa grl and Peytongal chapter 1 . 3/12/2009
I really lk this story! its a fav. of mine! Thanks!
| edwardisaputz chapter 16 . 2/17/2009
You do Jacob and Nessie very well. Love this story. I think the ending was very good, if a little predictable. The last line is fantastic , tho'. Go little miss firecraker! lol
There are quite a few typos and other mistakes in your stories but I am a big fan of your writing. You tell a good story. With some polishing I think you could tell great ones. Look forward to more of your work-Bob
| stephanie chapter 16 . 2/7/2009
i love this story! keep it going! its amazing!
| monster'freak chapter 16 . 2/5/2009
i love it...
| sugaandspice4990 chapter 16 . 2/5/2009
Hey! This was a really good story! I think it ended perfectly! I was totally rooting for letting her stay in Forks, especially because as you said Nessie had to fight for what she wanted just like Bella and Edward did. Sometimes you have to fight for what you want even if people don't agree with you. I'm sorry the ending isn't how you pictured it, but I really liked this ending! If you don't mind me asking what was your vision for the ending?
Can't wait to read more of you stories! Happy Writing!
| Completely Dipendente chapter 16 . 2/5/2009
That. Is. So. Damn. CUTE!
The bit about the Calm made me Aww D
And funny too, even better ha-ha
Cutest and most cleverly written FanFic Ever!
You are a true Genius
| pawis100 chapter 15 . 2/4/2009
LOL this is so funny and a really sweet story I love it please continue and very nice work :)
| monster'freak chapter 15 . 2/3/2009
o crap god edward is so overprotective...
i love it...
| Completely Dipendente chapter 15 . 2/3/2009
What's he going to say? S D
I'm giving myself brain ache trying to work it out here P
| Violent-Asp chapter 2 . 2/3/2009
This is a good story but work on your grammar- PLEASE! It's not illegal to use conjunctions.
| Completely Dipendente chapter 14 . 2/2/2009
She was all Upset then
But good old Jake cheered her up
Jake is so Sweet in this Story!
Bless his little Heart