Reviews for Northman's Off Rivington
radiate689 chapter 8 . 8/23/2013
Hehehe
radiate689 chapter 7 . 8/23/2013
good chapter
radiate689 chapter 6 . 8/23/2013
Nice.
radiate689 chapter 5 . 8/23/2013
:-) .
radiate689 chapter 4 . 8/23/2013
Nice
radiate689 chapter 3 . 8/23/2013
Hehe
radiate689 chapter 2 . 8/23/2013
:-)
radiate689 chapter 1 . 8/23/2013
good start
Ceramicmama chapter 1 . 8/9/2013
Wow!
Seriously chapter 16 . 6/27/2013
Wouldn't of minded? How about...wouldn't HAVE minded?
Dear lord chapter 15 . 6/27/2013
Do you not have spell check? It's DINING, not dinning. That's like, 2nd grade spelling.
Comple.what chapter 14 . 6/27/2013
Google "compliment versus complement." There is a difference.
The phrase is chapter 14 . 6/27/2013
"She swam in the shirt," not "the shirt swam on her." Jeez.
Get a dictionary chapter 12 . 6/27/2013
And spell check. And a beta. And probably a refresher course in the English language. It's "cheek," not "check" and "haphazardly," not "half-hazardly." And for the love of god, in the US, the proper spelling is "spilled," not "spilt." Though I guess I should give you some credit. At least you spelled it correctly in one language.
Guest chapter 32 . 5/18/2013
Awwwwwwwwwwwww loved it
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