Reviews for Magnus Opus
Krystal McKenna chapter 1 . 6/7/2010
You really captured emotion well here, for such a short story. (A perfect 100 word drabble!)

That line

"She never tripped and fell over her own soul"

was particularly touching to me. Not even entirely sure why, but it was.

Wonderfully written.
Endings Matter Most chapter 1 . 2/2/2009
Simply amazing... beautiful! It makes me sad though... :(
Five Minute Obsessions chapter 1 . 1/27/2009
Short, simple, clear-cut, striking, awesome. My favourite line:

He was the unfinished painting―the one with so much potential with every brushstroke, with every choice. It took only a single mistake to mar it past recognition.

OMFG. You've just summed up Riku's whole character in two sentences. ;_; I LOVE YOU. *Asplodes*