Reviews for Heliodrome Collision
Guest chapter 32 . 4/23
why I'd "done" what I did
Guest chapter 12 . 4/22
your you're, not an isolated incident, c'mon son
Guest chapter 36 . 4/20
loosing losing
Guest chapter 29 . 4/20
desert dessert sorry
Guest chapter 29 . 4/20
I like your writing so take this as kindly as you can but christ please don't do the accent thing again, the text isn't copyable so I had to parse the raw html code into a plain text editor to get rid of the accent and a few grammatical errors
Guest chapter 28 . 4/20
Issues in the second perspective change, mix of third and first person with Kate
Guest chapter 28 . 4/20
so *as* to not embarass yourself ? maybe
Guest chapter 26 . 4/20
trying to* rein* her in some
BooksAreMedicine chapter 29 . 9/6/2015
It seems like her dad is warming up to Matt, Matt does keep a cool head and has some great stories
BooksAreMedicine chapter 24 . 9/6/2015
I absolutely love that last line, so romantic, Oppel is a genius
BooksAreMedicine chapter 22 . 9/6/2015
Nice to see Kate has to experience what Matt did in the first book where it was Kate or the ship.
BooksAreMedicine chapter 18 . 9/6/2015
Very sweet
BooksAreMedicine chapter 16 . 9/6/2015
Good writing, nice switch in perspectives
BooksAreMedicine chapter 14 . 9/6/2015
Great chapter! Bravo!
BooksAreMedicine chapter 13 . 9/6/2015
Liked her point of view of their relationship
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