Reviews for Heliodrome Collision
Clevingerrr chapter 37 . 6/1/2014
Holy's over. I remember starting this story 2 months ago, reading it piece by piece until I decided to finish it off a couple of days back. It's almost bittersweet, seeing this come to an end.

Let me get this out of the way: you have a knack for writing stories in the Airborn universe. If I didn't know any better, I'd have mistaken your writing for Kenneth Oppel's. All of the characters are spot-on, the writing is fitting to each story's theme, and the expansions you did to the ending of Starclimber are very creative and imaginative. Honestly, this was just a spectacular story. I loved every chapter of it, especially the Matt & Kate focused ones and the alternate character POV's (like Tobias, Kate, etc.).

My advice to you? Keep writing. You have a ton of talent with this sort of thing, and even writing fanfiction like this puts it to excellent use. This is the first time in almost half a year that one story made me favorite an author, but I believe the circumstances behind this one are special. I hope to read more of your works soon; if they're as good as the stories enclosed in this collection, then it'll be a pleasure to dive back into it.
floppinholder chapter 37 . 1/22/2014
Terrific one-shots. And although you said you were done, I think it would be interesting if you did one from Mr. de Vriee POV at the garden party in the beginning of Starclimber. Please? You are, after all, a great writer.
Guest chapter 37 . 9/22/2012
Nooooooooooo! Why did you have to end it!?
Guest chapter 36 . 8/30/2012
An update please?
junebugz21 chapter 9 . 6/13/2012
It's nice how much Kennethn Oppel made the mood change so quickly when they kissed. I think you could have used less of Oppel's own dialogue and made up your own, but apart from that, I love this.
junebugz21 chapter 7 . 6/12/2012
I am beginning to see Miss Simpkins as an actual "responsible" chaperone, because you made her seem that way, if she had to come with Kate. I have no idea why she was so dramatic in the books, though.
junebugz21 chapter 6 . 6/12/2012
I have to agree, Matt and Nadira do NOT make the best couple...Kate and Matt belong together. I understand Nadira, but I am positive Nadira and Matt are not exactly the perfect couple.
junebugz21 chapter 5 . 6/12/2012
No offense, but it's a bit like reading Skybreaker over again. I think you use too many big parts of the books in your fanfic. I think it would be better if you made up a ton of stuff, instead write about things that happened from points of view.

Also, I think it's coming along nicely. I don't know that I could write better fanfics. Apart from my "ideas" or whatever, I think it's great.
junebugz21 chapter 4 . 6/12/2012
I think this is one of the most fabulous Skybreaker fanfics ever...I think you write a lot like Kenneth Oppel. However, I like 1st person writing better than 3rd person.
junebugz21 chapter 3 . 6/12/2012
I love how you do the chapters by different points of view. i would have never thought to do a chapter with Grunel or Hendrickson as narrators.
junebugz21 chapter 2 . 6/12/2012
i like how you alternate between the books-Chapter 1-Skybreaker-Chapter 2-Airborn
junebugz21 chapter 1 . 6/12/2012
Hey, aia like your first chapter and how you quoted the book...
Indain chapter 35 . 10/4/2011
The End?
Togira Ikonka chapter 35 . 1/20/2011
Yay an update!

The pie ones made me chuckle because it is so like Matt to just bend to Kates will but not be particularly pleased by it.

They were all really good and I thtoroughly enjoyed them!
Justlooseit00 chapter 32 . 10/11/2010
haha i remember this was one of my favorite scenes in the book.. i don't remember why. it's really a pity that this archive doesn't have more authors/readers. this series is fantastic. anyways, glad to see that you're back on fanfiction after a year - long break. just kidding. i don't know how long you were gone. but still, glad to see you again. :D
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