Hey honestly the story is rather interesting. But I guess you could have had more description about your surroundings or the armor. Im a writer from fictionpress so I had hardly visit fan fiction. But hey , your story caught me into it. Keep your stories coming. I'm gonna read your next chapter now. Good work.

really nice man i like the idea love to see more

You really should keep this up, it's pretty good. You should see if you can get this to be an actual Kamen Rider series.

DASM

for some reason, Kai slightly reminds me of Tendou but still a good chapter though can't wait to see the other 4 riders

hey nice story,well i can't wait to see what happen next