|Reviews for PE|
| crotia chapter 16 . 2/25
You write really nice but sometimes I'm confused though. After a while and reading some more it clears but you certainly need to focus while reading. That isn't necessarily a bad thing though.
| crotia chapter 13 . 2/25
I hope the coach will find out about Edmund dying. That will be good for sure
| crotia chapter 12 . 2/25
Oh, poor them.
| crotia chapter 9 . 2/24
They must have gotten some strange looks
| crotia chapter 6 . 2/23
It's really beautiful
| crotia chapter 5 . 2/23
I loved your Orieus/Edmund bonding and you did a really good job with the flashback.
| crotia chapter 4 . 2/23
Where do you get the language from? Is it an actual language or something? And I'm really confused with the collins thing.
| crotia chapter 3 . 2/23
Your writing style is really good
| crotia chapter 1 . 2/23
I am so glad my PE teacher doesn't fancy running laps or doing muscle exercises.
| Bronze Cat chapter 4 . 2/5
I realise I'm only on Chapter 4 of 30 but I had to pause in my reading to tell you that I simply ADORE the Old Narnian language! Personally, I love languages and I was always a little bit disappointed by everyone speaking English. This is a beautiful addition to the Narnian world! :3
| DS chapter 3 . 2/3
| choco.love chapter 30 . 2/2
what in the world have i've been missing for these past few years?! why did i only read this fic just now?! I really love your story its amazing... i really sad about susan though when i read C.S Lewis's last book...i like Susan maybe because i can somehow relate to her coz i'm an elder sister too...she's have the characters like any elder sister should have ( i think in my opinion)...taking care of the siblings (younger or not) is really challenging...its like being second in command to your mother...but i really glad about susan's ending in your fic...overall, i was really overwhelm by your story...i literately didnt move for a day from my computer...thanks, you really made my day
| Alexa Skywalker chapter 30 . 1/24
Loved this story! It has to be one of the best fanfictions I've ever read.
And I'm so glad Susan's back!
| Alexa Skywalker chapter 29 . 1/23
Cool chapter! Friends of Narnia, I want to be a part of it! Lol
| Alexa Skywalker chapter 28 . 1/22
Yay! Everything's ok again!