The vocabulary scares me

very good

good

OK

This was nothing like I expected. After reading the first chapter, I thought this was going to be a lovely brotherly-fluff, feel-good-on-a-depressingly-rainy-day kind of story. I did not expect the twists and turns.

Murder. Psychopathy. Desecrated corpses. Visceral cruelty. Blackmail. Bedlam and mayhem.

I find your daring extraordinary — placing the burden of insanity on a beloved main character of such a successful and enduring literary work — it didn’t sit right with me at first. But you convinced me. The more I read, and the the more I thought on it, the more I realized Peter’s weakness could be nothing else. As the golden child of the Pevensie family and the sole High King of Narnia, his burden is so…well, magnificent, that his weakness would have to be equally and magnificently disastrous.

The most intriguing aspect of your writing is the depth and complexity of the characters. I found myself immersed so thoroughly in this world and its mannerisms that, a few times, I found myself unconsciously holding your headcanon as the standard while reading fics by other authors. Whoops! Absolutely a compliment for you, but I had to change that attitude real quick to be fair to everyone else!

Yet that is what draws me to this ‘verse. The bond of absolutely unconditional love between the Pevensie siblings is so dynamic and real. I ache for this kind of relationship with brothers I do not have, and treasure all the more the bond with the sister I do. That kind of emotional connection to your work only makes it more immersive.

Hello! I really enjoyed this story
In reading it, I was struck again and again by the Gospel themes and near-quotations of Scripture. Are you a believer? If so, you might like to know that it bled through on every page.

Great! :D

I read this years ago, but recently I found myself remembering it fondly, so now I'm starting again. It's one of my ultra favorites! I'd love to see some new Narnia from you, Tonzura!

love this chapter, the Pevensies’ address is 64 Dorset Avenue, Finchley according to the evacuee labels from the 2005 movie

Good!

This was the most beautiful fanfic I have ever read. Absolutely stunning. I love it!

a story well written with mutli level world building
it was great

its a rare glimpse we saw of the mother. how did all of her children get into this rich schools.

new reader ... read 6 chapters in one sitting.. its that good

Hi! I was wondering if you created the Old Narnian used here, or if you found a translator for it - I've been looking for one for ages. If it was a translator, let me know where I can find it? If you made it yourself, then you did an extraordinary job, and I suppose I shan't be able to use it!
This is my third time reading this, and I love your works.
Thanks-
Blue xoxo
(also if you're ever on ao3, I'm over there as Blue Pisces)