oi,this is stupid of me, but is there anyone who remembers this site?

This isn't depressing. You succeeded in making it touching and interesting. I don't mind the moral. Either way, this is well written.

That was really deep. And then the ending paragraph felt like a punch to the gut. Well done.

...*sob*...

Short and a decent moral. I like how you characterized the old man with his speech pattern. It made him more real.

Sad ending, but that's how ALL of my skifree games ended, I think.

PFT

So touching...so tragic...

bravo.

I'm gonna go play SkiFree now *sniffle*

awsome. But i was confused at the end did te abamidable snowman get her or what. you didnt really explain it. i would like to know so could you post it in the rviews because i cannot give you my email.

*gasp*
Oh, that was awful! Poor old guy! Poor girl! I dunno which is sadder - the story, or the fact that I'm so touched by it!

;_; :( That's so sad...

Wow that was disturbingly depressing. Good, but depressing.

Damn the was funny!

heh. Pretty good. It was pretty well written and I enjoyed it but, yes, it was pretty depressing.

SkiFree fan fiction... i wasn't expecting that!

A sad little tale, which makes you think. I like it! Trying to live for others is a noble goal, but a lot more difficult than it sounds. A good moral to present though. And ignore closed minded people who cant see that a persons religion doesn't make a person.

Good stuff!

Wow...deep.

However, the bloody leg thing makes me smile, because it's so out of style with the rest of it.

I actually found this hilarious.I may have mentioned that I laugh at the stupidest 's idea if this is supposed to be funny,but I couldn't stop laughing o_O

Thnx for reviewing another one of my poems :)