Reviews for For Others
gyro-ball chapter 1 . 7/6
oi,this is stupid of me, but is there anyone who remembers this site?
Chipster-roo chapter 1 . 5/21/2015
This isn't depressing. You succeeded in making it touching and interesting. I don't mind the moral. Either way, this is well written.
The Lady Yuki chapter 1 . 3/30/2014
That was really deep. And then the ending paragraph felt like a punch to the gut. Well done.

...*sob*...
FrictionX42 chapter 1 . 6/23/2011
Short and a decent moral. I like how you characterized the old man with his speech pattern. It made him more real.

Sad ending, but that's how ALL of my skifree games ended, I think.
Anon chapter 1 . 11/27/2009
PFT
Dan chapter 1 . 4/14/2007
So touching...so tragic...

bravo.

I'm gonna go play SkiFree now *sniffle*
Al the Critic chapter 1 . 6/27/2004
awsome. But i was confused at the end did te abamidable snowman get her or what. you didnt really explain it. i would like to know so could you post it in the rviews because i cannot give you my email.
Moonlit Seductress chapter 1 . 1/8/2004
*gasp*
Oh, that was awful! Poor old guy! Poor girl! I dunno which is sadder - the story, or the fact that I'm so touched by it!
Shadow131 chapter 1 . 9/4/2003
;_; :( That's so sad...
Darkman chapter 1 . 5/31/2003
Wow that was disturbingly depressing. Good, but depressing.
Chachi the Hibachi chapter 1 . 4/27/2003
Damn the was funny!
Happy Pappy chapter 1 . 3/22/2003
heh. Pretty good. It was pretty well written and I enjoyed it but, yes, it was pretty depressing.
Deathwalker chapter 1 . 12/5/2002
SkiFree fan fiction... i wasn't expecting that!

A sad little tale, which makes you think. I like it! Trying to live for others is a noble goal, but a lot more difficult than it sounds. A good moral to present though. And ignore closed minded people who cant see that a persons religion doesn't make a person.

Good stuff!
Megaroni chapter 1 . 9/27/2002
Wow...deep.

However, the bloody leg thing makes me smile, because it's so out of style with the rest of it.
Demented Chicken chapter 1 . 9/26/2002
I actually found this hilarious.I may have mentioned that I laugh at the stupidest 's idea if this is supposed to be funny,but I couldn't stop laughing o_O

Thnx for reviewing another one of my poems :)
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