Reviews for Story 3: Memories
mjg021182 chapter 7 . 11/26/2009
OK, so this is the third story... When I read the first two, I thought they were good, I liked the concept. But this story, WOW. This story made me realise you aren't a good writer, but a great one. The way you brought out the emotions about Kate dying, Ari being Ziva's brother, etc was just amazing. Fantastic.

Ziny-DiNozzo chapter 1 . 3/2/2009
three brothers, kate had three older brothers. and a sister in miami. onward!
KissofCrimson chapter 7 . 2/4/2009
I'm really liking this story so far. You've been doing a great job with it. I'd love to see more of the Tony/Ziva storyline.
ejn10175 chapter 7 . 2/4/2009
u should definatly continue with their secret realationship cause that has got to have some interesting moments
BellaWriterChic chapter 7 . 2/4/2009
It's over? I don't want it to end! Keep the series going! You've got something great going.
M E Wofford chapter 7 . 2/4/2009
Either will work.

Personal preference.

Stop here

And start sequel.
BellaWriterChic chapter 6 . 2/3/2009
Just the thought of Tony's face when Ziva said she killed Ari was priceless. I like it. Do you think anyone will ever find out on the show Ziva really killed Ari and not Gibbs? That would be an interesting show. (Back to the story) I like how this is coming on. I can't wait to read the rest!
samleigh chapter 6 . 2/3/2009
very very good chapter.
ejn10175 chapter 6 . 2/3/2009
please just let them be happy. update soon
M E Wofford chapter 6 . 2/3/2009
Good chapter!

I am glad Tony's standing up to her and following his heart!
M E Wofford chapter 5 . 1/31/2009
This was a very satisfying chapter.

Bad guy brought down.

Little girl rescued.

Ziva and little girl bonding with Tony watching.

ejn10175 chapter 5 . 1/31/2009
omg when r tony and ziva just going to get killing me here. update soon
BellaWriterChic chapter 4 . 1/30/2009
Great story! But I thought Ziva's sister was Tali, not Kali
M E Wofford chapter 4 . 1/30/2009
Good one.

It is a conundrum.

I hope they can work it out.


M E Wofford chapter 3 . 1/29/2009
You seem to be doing just fine on your own!
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