this was one of the funniest chapters i ever read, i loved how pearl acted like franziska and that dream or shold i say nightmare was so funny.

Nice dream Phoenix. Awesome job. I was dying of laughter while I was reading this. Update soon!

Phoenix is never going to get a break, is he?

Though, I gotta know... Maya called phoenix... erm... "phoenix" a bunch of times in the last chapter... was that done on purpose or by accident?

I was dying at the part when Pearl was acting like Franziska. Awesom ejob! Update soon!

DUDE! PLEASE CONTINUE THE STORY! WAH!

aw! *claps excitedly* yay! that was really cute! i love how they both really love each other but are oblivious to the fact.

What kind of movies maya watch? evil leprechaun ninjas from Jupiter LOL

it was a great chapter as always.

Hahaha. Wow Maya, you really do know nothing about dating. Awesome job! Update soon!

HEY! great story!

this is halarious!~

please update soon!~

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But she didn't seem too concerned last time they talked?

Yay, this was fun. Good work!

(In reality, it looked more like she had to go to the bathroom).

Lol. A pretend boyfriend with Maya still keeping all her naiveness and innocence. It's genius. :)

Hope you're updating soon xx

Can't wait to see what Mia is going to do next.(good thing she doesn't carry a bamboo sword anymore)

HAHHAHA I really like this, i cant wait to see what mia is going to do to phoenix.

HAHAHAH! I laughed so hard at the last few paragraphs! You also wrapped up the Iris issue really well!