Reviews for The Only Ones Left |
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![]() ![]() ![]() this is truely an impossibly awesome story. You can't leave us all hanging there! Write more, quick! Please! This is sooo good! |
![]() ![]() ![]() r u gonna put witches in it? Either way, this is a great story. that's great that he found another of his kind-does that mean she's the one? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awsome! looking a the review below, i hope too that iorek comes in later. he's really cool! so is this story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is to cool. Is tobes the one, if not, who is? Keep it up! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, that was scaree...but really really good! First fanfic in a while that i'm reading al the way through at once. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cool...he's really smart and fails tests, like me!(kidding on the smart part) Great chapter, gettin better all the time. Keep it up. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is seriously getting goood! It's nice to see a decent writer here! I love your style. Going to read more chapters... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow! This is amasing! Really sounds like its going somewhere. Look foreward to reading the other chapters! |
![]() ![]() Oh. Wow. That was awesome! I loved it! And right when the burly guy that caught him said that there was a second, I KNEW it was Iris! That was amazing! I love this story! And the beginning, the part about "when the sun began to spread it fingers of soft morning light over the horizon..." that was SO COOL! Please get ch. 8 up soon! I know where you live! I WILL hunt you down if you leave me hanging. That rules. So cool. :) Write more! Thanks. ~Red XIII |
![]() ![]() Yay! That was SO cool. And, huzzah! I finally got to read it! This is awesome. I can't wait for the major plot twist...so I won't. Gotta go! Thanks so much for writing this! Bye. ~Red XIII. |
![]() ![]() Nice... I like. A very good story of epic proportions. I know this is a sucky reveiw but deal with it |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love it! OOOOOOOOOO somethings brewing between those two. Hehehehe well I reveiwed your story k? Now stop cussing me out it gives me a headache. Please continue the dust bunnies command you! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Right, now you only need to get them out of there (gee, I wonder how you're going to pull that off?) BTW, I find the different worlds of HDM to be interesting in the sense that they are not a "multiverse" as in an infinite number of possibilities affected by one another, because if they were, nothing could ever threaten them since if something happened (like the Dust starting to leave in all worlds) that would instantly create just as many new worlds where it didn't. Therefore, the worlds of HDM must be like the Shadows in Roger Zelazny's Amber-books, mere reflections that exist in thousands of thousands, but not in infinite numbers and are not affected by each other. Anyway, I'm ranting. Get the next chapter up as soon as you can, this is getting seriously interesting. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's always that way in the beginning. I suspect he will get allot better at it once he gets some more training. This reminds me, I hope Iorek will appear in this story. He would have EATEN that thing, hehehe! More! Mohohohore! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is just SO cool! HA! In your faces, angels! BTW, Dark Nation, of course you should write for fun! I can't even imagine any other sane reason to do it. It's just that I'm something of a perfectionist and I have noticed that if you don't know where your story is heading, it probably ain't heading anywhere. Just try to have patience with me, k? |