Reviews for The Only Ones Left
TheNightIsFading chapter 6 . 12/19/2001
This was a great chapter. Please write more soon!
Myst Phlaerah Nanaki chapter 6 . 12/19/2001
Wow...that was one good fanfic! Is Iris going to be the story any more (like in flashbacks or whatever)? Please write more more more!
Dark Nation42 chapter 4 . 12/19/2001
Thank you, Ghost, for your constructive criticism.

Keep in mind, though, that I'm just writing this for fun, not actually trying to make a big story out of it. I think you're right, though...I might change the order of things a little later to make it easier and more sensible to follow. For now, the part about his family will come a little later. Thanks for your suggestions!
Ghost chapter 4 . 12/19/2001
Telepaths are cool! This kid would get along great with Will, yes? They could sit and discuss the soultearing agony of guilt and stuff ;)
Ghost chapter 3 . 12/19/2001
This character is cooler then I thought. He's a P6 or P7 class telepath AND a mathematical genius in Mathilda class. And he fails tests on purpose! Hehehe! I like his style.

The double-flashbacking thing is a bit difficult to follow, but that not much a problem. I think you should have put the axe-eradication of his family after his memories from school, for instance. You should write a synopsis before you start the story so that you know what to write beforehand.

BTW, Mr Stevens wasn’t inspired by a certain malignant but really cool Harry Potter character, was he?
Ghost chapter 2 . 12/18/2001
Oooh! Eeeevil Bad Guys! Just like we like 'em! There's just one thing I'd like to point out; if your character is to curse, try to avoid mixing stuff like "You f#ck#ng p##ce of sh#t!" with stuff like "Damn your soul, your blood shall be mine!" It's not that I have anything against anachronism, just not in cursing and other kinds of speech. It sounds a little off.
Ghost chapter 1 . 12/18/2001
Well, I'll be! You might actually be really good at this!
Seph Girl chapter 6 . 12/17/2001
Thank You! I'm so glad you updated! I've been needing something to read. None of the other fanfics I read were updated today so I'm glad atleast one was. I'm eternaly greatful! Keep up the GOOD work! .
Prof. Sparky chapter 5 . 12/17/2001
Wow! This is really cool! Aylee is right, this IS spiffy! _~
Aylee the Dragon chapter 5 . 12/15/2001
Aya! That was such a cool chapter! That must be his gift! I wounder who the choosen one will be then? Please continue I really want to know what's going to happen.
TheNightIsFading chapter 5 . 12/15/2001
I love your writing. This is a great story. Thank you for reviewing mine, and today I posted the first His Dark Materials story I wrote.
TheNightIsFading chapter 4 . 12/13/2001
Thank you thank you thank you for writing more! Now write chapter five. Thanks for reviewing my story too. Your story is probably better than all of mine mixed together!
anon chapter 1 . 12/12/2001
salmakia and tialys 4ever!
Aylee the Dragon chapter 4 . 12/12/2001
Good Lord Dark Nation that was morbid! I like it! - Please continue you are a very good writer/author. Come on more violence... I mean plot please! ;;;;
shesha chapter 2 . 12/10/2001
Oooh shiney! I mean, that was good! Cant wait to read the next chapter(s)!
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