That was one of the best HDM fanfic I've read in a long long time! Keep up the good work! (;

Woooaaahhh! That was quite good! Please write more! Mojo the Mutant Monkey Man commands so!

Aya! That was good. What is the test? What's going to happen to Tobias? I need to know right now and only you can tell me. So please hurry with the next chapter don't make me say cheese... too late.

Aya! I loved it, loved the blood... I mean plot. Now I'm going to go read your next chapter and read that. Sniff... no one ever reveiws my stories... sniff...

hey, that's really really good! usually i don't read stories with original characters because it usually is just like the book (or whatever the catagory is), but i really liked this. keep up the good work

Excellent chapter. You really, really should write some more soon! The descriptions were vivid without being too flowery and it flowed very well. I'm already (though I read it only two mins ago) forming theories about Tobias. Love his daemon's name too. The chapter really sucked me in and I'm dying to read some more. Brilliant!

o.O I love it! Hope to see the next chapter up soon. Good Luck!

You guys are too kind! I'll get Chapter Two up as soon as I can; right now I'm still having to work some stuff out with the plot. KirjavaLyra, not revealing about how Toby knows about the knife and about his past is one of the ways I try to keep people reading! But thanks for the review; I've read some of your stories and you're a great author too! Kudos!

That was kick-ass good! Dark Nation you have to continue! The dust bunnies command you! otherwise i'll be forced to do ... THE MONKEY DANCE! DUN DUN DUN (dramatic drumroll). Okay that was sad of me. Anywho you have to go on I'm so caught up in the mood now! Please go on.

Oh. Sweet. Christ! That was awesome. Can you send that to me? Please? Write more! My life may well depend on it... "Dark Nation"-that so deserves a part II. Please finish it. That brightened my day, I don't think I've ever read something so awesomely intriguing. The description was so...so...cool. Nothing else fits, it rules! Thank you so much for writing that!

You HAVE to write more soon! You are a great author. Better than I am! (Which isn't saying alot;) I love the descriptions in your story, but I think you should explain how he was hurt and how he knows about the knife. this, to me, doesn't seem too different from Lyra's world. is Tobias reading minds or can he just sense them or something? I love your story, but you have to write more!