Reviews for The Only Ones Left |
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![]() ![]() ![]() THIS IS SOOOOO GOOOOOOD! Omg! I know that you are going to continue this anyway, but please oh please oh please do it quickly. THANK YOU! |
![]() ![]() An incredible journey into the tortured mind of Tobias. It was marvelously captured. Spectacular. I hope you don't stop here. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It was good until chapter 15. HOW COULD YOU ALLOW A DAEMON TO BE TORTURED SO. Im dissapointed, humph! |
![]() ![]() Another interesting story, though odd at times... It's spread out a bit, and is VERY easy to read. The little mess in the last chapter was quite interesting... |
![]() ![]() good, lke it please keep writing, Tobias is saved isnt he? please say yes...it wouldnt work otherwise ... how could it? aaah. luv Rio x |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oi, Nation! Long time no see! Sorry to have neglected my own HDM-fic, but I have fallen into a Anime craze and I have to wait for it to burn out. Don't worry, I haven't given up hope on The Stained Blade just yet. This was... kinda disturbing. A neat little mess you've put Tobias in, huh? Can't wait to see how he gets out. See ya! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. Just wow. I'm speechless. |
![]() ![]() OKAY! Here i am! Reviewing! I told you what i thought in real life, but that wasn't enough! joking. it was a great first chapter, eventhough i know nothing about the story line. I'll read again when my computer is fed up. well we gotta put the tent up, bye! |
![]() ![]() ![]() yaay. I can finally review this darn thing! *hopes* Anyway, very descriptic. Good job. Good, yes, very good. I loved it. _. |
![]() ![]() That was bloody brillainT! You HAVE to write more! It's the best fan-fic on this website. loadsa love littleredfruit |
![]() ![]() I don't have to lie to say that this chapter is good! I liked the conversation between Will and Kirjava. As Ceres Wunderkind said before, that's exactly why we have daemons. To argue with you if necessary, to help you think things through, but most importantly to stand by you at all costs. This idea shows in the slightly more disturbing encounter between Tobias and his daemon. To the end, she is convinced that it was all her fault'. Poor Aerotsierma. Sidney Dune is incredibly evil. I love the way he talks :'you will mossst ssssertainly not fail me, sssniper.' Sounds a bit like Gollum. |
![]() ![]() ![]() DAMN... This is the best HDM fic on here!... ...I can't believe Tobias did that... ~,~ Such a good chapter...though sad I CAN'T wait for the next chapter too! Keep up the good writing! , |
![]() ![]() ![]() O_o WHOOOOOOOOOAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA! Tobias got a little creepy on us! What kind of person beats up their own daemon! HUH! He needs a hug! *hugs tobias* Hey I loved this chapter even though it was a bit odd but I can't wait for the next chapter! _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was a really good chapter. I hope Aero is all right. I can't believe Tobias did that to her. And what will happen to Will and Lyra and Iris? Keep writing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh goody! More great action writing, more super plot development, yet another nasty situation! Keep 'em coming! |