|Reviews for The Power Of YouTube|
| blazey021 chapter 14 . 1/10/2010
Hey! I just wanted to say that it was a good story! but ... you wanted constructive criticism... so not to be mean but here it goes. to help you! ]
-when you keep putting your a/n's all through the chapters, its really distracting from the story.
personally when i read a story its like a little movie in
my head, so when you keep doing that its just distracting
-another thing is, i know you like to fit in a lot in your chaps with all the characters but you change pov's a lot and that distracting too, especially since you dont write much for any of them at one given time
-thirdly... get a better beta! lol it was a good story line and everything it was just very... choppy.
i know how its hard if its your first fanfic, but
a good beta should help with the choppiness.
so yea... i hope i didnt offend you... honestly it was to help! ]
good job and keep writing!
| TeamEdward70 chapter 15 . 11/1/2009
I liked the ending. It was very unexpected. I'm about to start the sequel.
| Eternally-Mine chapter 16 . 8/7/2009
this was pretty good... a little fast paced but still pretty good... i liked it
| BrownEyes11 chapter 4 . 7/27/2009
Nice. I have to stop reading now, but I will continue! Also, I read the cliff-hanger story, and I tried to leave you a review, but my butt-ish computer was not working, so here it is: Pam this is BrownEyes, and I am ORDERING you to finish this story, or I will be in your room tonight with a jackhammer, a bottle of Axe, and an army of angry flesh-eating chincillas! I think it should be Jacob.
| G33K3D.OuT.PrOf3sSiOnal chapter 14 . 6/19/2009
| PeaceLoveTwilight1995 chapter 14 . 5/7/2009
OH MY FUCKIN GOD! I WAS SO THINKING THAT! I WAS LIKE HM ESME IS DIVORCED AND THEY NEVER MENTIONED CARLISLE BEING MARRIED...IT WOULD BE SO FUNNY IF THEY DID, AND BECAME THE TRADITIONAL CULLEN FAMILIY, AND THE CARLISLE WAS LIKE I HAVE TO SAY SOMETHING, AND THEN IT HAPPENS! I WAS LIKE :O OMG I'M SIDEKICK LIKE ALICE! BUT OMFG THAT WAS HILARIOUS!
| crazy towns prez chapter 16 . 4/20/2009
Damn hell a good I'm going to read the next one rght now
| sweetevie chapter 13 . 4/16/2009
HAHA! Emmet would say that "is t illegal to date your step sister" LOL!
| Volleyballgirl1112 chapter 16 . 3/22/2009
| Evolutions Vampire chapter 15 . 3/19/2009
ok i loved how it ended it was so sweet and i cant wait for the seguel
| TrickForTreat chapter 13 . 3/15/2009
Holy crap! That came out of nowhere! Good update!
| forevacullens chapter 15 . 3/15/2009
I thought how you finished was cute and amazingly sweet... But it left enough room so that I really really want a sequel... Just remember to make up a really big twist for the next book... I love this so much, I'm so glad you're doing a sequel. :D
Taytay Mariee! ;D
| Acorn9881 chapter 14 . 3/15/2009
It was great!
I would LOVE a sequel!
Please make one!
| ImJealousOfTheReceptionist chapter 15 . 3/15/2009
i liked it... ( the ending) I'm glad ur doing a sequel though. I kinda sorta wanted the story to keep going...
| saraha chapter 11 . 3/14/2009
OMG this is such a great story!