Reviews for The Red Line
Itzrenaynay chapter 35 . 10/29/2024
I don’t think he should have a choice. He should have to be in witness protection program because he needs to be protected. He literally is disabled now doesn’t matter. He’s a cop. He has a disability now he doesn’t have a leg he needs to be protected. they can’t just let him go to forks and do whatever the fuck he wants
Itzrenaynay chapter 32 . 10/29/2024
I’m not even halfway through, but I had to make a comment before I kept reading. She is so dumb. She is so stupid. She went to this place that Victoria is a killer not knowing James very well sees all these people who are psychotic and stays and says she wants to be a sub and then tries to flaunt her fucking Edward to Victoria someone who is a murderer are you stupid? She’s so dumb.
Itzrenaynay chapter 31 . 10/29/2024
She’s a moron
Itzrenaynay chapter 30 . 10/29/2024
I remember she does end up going but like what a stupid fucking move and not even telling her dad that James is trying to set her up is completely asinine. She should be like I called you because my professor is brother to Victoria and he wants me to go have dinner with her or what are we doing, make an actual plan hello
Itzrenaynay chapter 26 . 10/29/2024
How are you going to crash a wedding and then request two different songs and say that your friends are the bride what if they’re like who the fuck is Bella and Edward?
Itzrenaynay chapter 25 . 10/29/2024
See I knew something with Tanya and Carlisle was the thing I wasn’t completely in the no kind of messed up honestly I hope ever gets to see katherine again
Itzrenaynay chapter 23 . 10/28/2024
Charlie gets to meet him, but I don’t remember if they ever talked to Edwards’s parents
Itzrenaynay chapter 20 . 10/28/2024
Like I know it, but I don’t because I don’t remember cause I haven’t read this in forever like I don’t know, but it has something to do Carlisle and Tanya, but I don’t know
Itzrenaynay chapter 19 . 10/28/2024
I can just imagine him hitting on rose or Alice and having them laugh in his face
Itzrenaynay chapter 16 . 10/28/2024
Are they gonna get in trouble for saving Edward from Raven?
Itzrenaynay chapter 14 . 10/28/2024
I think she doesn’t realize the gravity of the situation like not only can she cut Bella’s face up she can just kill Edward. her going off of rage and trying to fight someone who has complete control of another person is so idiotic.
Itzrenaynay chapter 13 . 10/28/2024
I feel like she knows something. I don’t know how she knows. I don’t know where she knows it from but she knows something and that’s why she did that in front of Bella and I think it has to do with James but I’m not positive but I think I remember the first time reading this that had something to do with James, probably
Itzrenaynay chapter 10 . 10/28/2024
Not him leaving her there I’m cackling
Itzrenaynay chapter 7 . 10/27/2024
Not them both lying lol
debb lavoie chapter 40 . 5/9/2024
Wow, you are a great writer. Like you said some time were tough with a capital T. I nearly died when he left with the marshal.
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