Reviews for The Red Line
debb lavoie chapter 40 . 5/9
Wow, you are a great writer. Like you said some time were tough with a capital T. I nearly died when he left with the marshal.
debb lavoie chapter 27 . 5/7
My heart is bleeding now. Such a good story.
debb lavoie chapter 26 . 5/7
You sure know how to write powerful scenes. I wanted to slap his parents.
debb lavoie chapter 25 . 5/6
A powerful chapter.
debb lavoie chapter 20 . 5/6
Was Tanya his love child from an affair. That would make sense.
debb lavoie chapter 16 . 5/4
Omg, Bella was sensational in her actions. Very clever. The whole scene of being hurt is... have no words. You are a Writer!
debb lavoie chapter 14 . 5/4
Omg, I want to pull all her hair out!
debb lavoie chapter 13 . 5/4
Victoria is fugly.
debb lavoie chapter 10 . 5/3
Victoria is
killing him by inches. Ugh!
Great chapter.
debb lavoie chapter 9 . 5/2
Oh god, his life is so painful. I want to give him a big hug
debb lavoie chapter 8 . 5/1
What a sad existence. He would be better of being a striper with bouncers nearby.
debb lavoie chapter 7 . 5/1
Your writing is so good. You make me feel the story.
debb lavoie chapter 6 . 5/1
Excellent chapter. Poor Edward, his parents didn't help him. Money corrupts.
debb lavoie chapter 6 . 5/1
He's calling a child. Who else.
debb lavoie chapter 5 . 5/1
Life was rough to Edward. His parents suck.
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