Reviews for The Red Line
lmc123 chapter 36 . 6/27
A little lighter, well timed
lmc123 chapter 35 . 6/27
Whoa... what a choice...
lmc123 chapter 32 . 6/26
Fuck me, that was one hell of a dramatic chapter! But pretty genius planning!
lmc123 chapter 30 . 6/26
Jeez this is nerve wracking
lmc123 chapter 27 . 6/25
Wish.. feel like I have been dreading this day as much as them..-
lmc123 chapter 24 . 6/25
Yes! He finds his balls! Charlie was fab, of course and showed him the way, now go get the hitch!
lmc123 chapter 23 . 6/25
Did I mention this story is brilliant? I put off reading it for ages as the summary put me off thought it was some magic mike.. crap. But it is a wonderfully written story
lmc123 chapter 22 . 6/25
This story is pretty amazing
kelmikmag chapter 24 . 6/23
love it!
kelmikmag chapter 16 . 6/22
Thank God!
ThMaWo chapter 25 . 6/21
well THAT was unexpected
KimberlyCullenPotter123 chapter 1 . 6/20
I was just wondering if this is a finished story, as I noticed you have already started and completed a sequel but this isn't marked as finished?
NaniOliveira chapter 1 . 6/19
Liked it!
ThMaWo chapter 10 . 6/14
I have a feeling Victoria planned the whole loan thing and actually wanted to recruit Edward even before he first met her. But I don't know that for sure. I guess I have to read on and find out. lol
awesome1 chapter 40 . 6/1
Awesome story, awesome plot, awesome way of writing, awesome chapters, awesome scenes, just…awesome everything. This story made me cry a lot and laugh at some points. Especially the action part at the end, holy hell that was awesome... Although I noticed that Bella once mentioned her mother being on a roadtrip with Phil then the next she died of cancer... It got me dizzy there a moment, or maybe I just missed something about that part but anyway...
I also would've love a scene of Bella and Katie meeting each other. That would've been so cool. What Katie thinks of Bella dating her daddy. Or maybe a visit to Tanya's grave? Secretly of course or before the while witness protection whatever... Or maybe a scene that would put Charlie,Katherine,Joseph,Emmet,Alice,Rosalie,and Jasper at ease knowing that they're alive and well, like that blank postcard thingy. Because my heart just breaks at the thought that they'll never see or contact each other ever again... Edward just reunited with Katherine and Joseph. Dude I feel like crying... Ugh

But other than that... AMAZING STORY. GOOD JOB. KUDOS. XO.
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