|Reviews for The Red Line|
| lmc123 chapter 32 . 6/26/2015
Fuck me, that was one hell of a dramatic chapter! But pretty genius planning!
| lmc123 chapter 30 . 6/26/2015
Jeez this is nerve wracking
| lmc123 chapter 27 . 6/25/2015
Wish.. feel like I have been dreading this day as much as them..-
| lmc123 chapter 24 . 6/25/2015
Yes! He finds his balls! Charlie was fab, of course and showed him the way, now go get the hitch!
| lmc123 chapter 23 . 6/25/2015
Did I mention this story is brilliant? I put off reading it for ages as the summary put me off thought it was some magic mike.. crap. But it is a wonderfully written story
| lmc123 chapter 22 . 6/25/2015
This story is pretty amazing
| kelmikmag chapter 24 . 6/23/2015
| kelmikmag chapter 16 . 6/22/2015
| ThMaWo chapter 25 . 6/21/2015
well THAT was unexpected
| KimberlyCullenPotter123 chapter 1 . 6/20/2015
I was just wondering if this is a finished story, as I noticed you have already started and completed a sequel but this isn't marked as finished?
| NaniOliveira chapter 1 . 6/19/2015
| ThMaWo chapter 10 . 6/14/2015
I have a feeling Victoria planned the whole loan thing and actually wanted to recruit Edward even before he first met her. But I don't know that for sure. I guess I have to read on and find out. lol
| awesome1 chapter 40 . 6/1/2015
Awesome story, awesome plot, awesome way of writing, awesome chapters, awesome scenes, just…awesome everything. This story made me cry a lot and laugh at some points. Especially the action part at the end, holy hell that was awesome... Although I noticed that Bella once mentioned her mother being on a roadtrip with Phil then the next she died of cancer... It got me dizzy there a moment, or maybe I just missed something about that part but anyway...
I also would've love a scene of Bella and Katie meeting each other. That would've been so cool. What Katie thinks of Bella dating her daddy. Or maybe a visit to Tanya's grave? Secretly of course or before the while witness protection whatever... Or maybe a scene that would put Charlie,Katherine,Joseph,Emmet,Alice,Rosalie,and Jasper at ease knowing that they're alive and well, like that blank postcard thingy. Because my heart just breaks at the thought that they'll never see or contact each other ever again... Edward just reunited with Katherine and Joseph. Dude I feel like crying... Ugh
But other than that... AMAZING STORY. GOOD JOB. KUDOS. XO.
| audiblyausten chapter 7 . 5/31/2015
I love the story so far. Okay, there's a potentially crazy idea I've been contemplating for a little while now...that Edward has a young daughter! It would explain who he calls every day, and why he dislikes little girl fantasies. It ALSO explains when he told Bella about pleading with his parents to let him back in while holding "her" in his arms...Edward would only go back to his parents if he truly needed help - or help for his loved one. Guess I'll see if my prediction comes true at some point! (I kind of hope it does.) :)
| dreamgirlrus23 chapter 40 . 5/24/2015
A REAL MASTERPIECE...WAT A BEAUTIFUL STORY...I LOVED IT
UR XTRMLY TALENTED DR WRITER...
U MADE ME CRY, LAUGH, N IN AWE...SO SO BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN
DAMN LOVE ZIS EDWARD