|Reviews for The Red Line|
| cinderele chapter 5 . 1/30/2009
i'm a fan. this is a great plot...so different, so interesting. thanks for the laughs...i had tears in my eyes & i could hardly catch my breath.
| SaphyreDraconis chapter 5 . 1/30/2009
Absolutely hilarious! Great job :)
| Kaitlin13 chapter 5 . 1/30/2009
I still love this story. It is hilarious at parts. I can't wait to read more.
| EmmettsTeddyBear chapter 5 . 1/30/2009
I'm LOVING it! I can't wait for the next chapter!
| howmanywayscanicallthisaurl chapter 5 . 1/30/2009
that was freaking great
that would've been very interesting lol
| EdwardlovesBella chapter 5 . 1/30/2009
OMG...i love this story..thank you so much for the speedy updates. I can't wait 2 read some more. does edward fall in love with bella? does he realize he can have a better life? i hope he ends up with his bella
| regan117 chapter 5 . 1/30/2009
The whole thing was great, but the ending of this chapter was FANTASTIC! I loved it. It was very visual - I could even picture him laying in the doorway. Can't wait for more!
| Mrs.Wholesome chapter 5 . 1/30/2009
I really liked this chapter. I liked how you incorporated the lines from the book/movie when Edward was warning Bella into the story but twisted it a bit. That makes me happy that it's smut with a great plot, and the way you describe the need Bella has for him, phenomonal.
| solarstar17 chapter 5 . 1/30/2009
I LOVE THIS STORY! i have a question is her pysch teach JAMES as in bad vamp JAMES? keep going!
| Dyonicia chapter 5 . 1/30/2009
I really enjoy this story, its different and keeps throwing curve balls. I'm looking forward to seeing where this goes :)
| Fairest of Them All chapter 5 . 1/30/2009
I am seriously enamored with this story. I can't wait to read more from Edward's POV and know what he is thinking and feeling rather than what the whore does to please. PLEASE update again soon! I'm addicted!
| EmmettsTeddyBear chapter 4 . 1/30/2009
My eyes are freaken watering! HOW? How in the hell do you do that? It's like you've taken my dream man and put him to paper perfectly...I think I love him...lol. You are my new best friend, and my favoritest writer! I adore your writing, keep up the great work. *understatement*
| Angels And Airwaves chapter 5 . 1/30/2009
| littleclarestar chapter 5 . 1/30/2009
I love this more and more. Sure, it's hot, but its also so deep. Edward is obviously so screwed up and I can't wait to watch him and Bella unravel each other's heads (and hearts?).
I am actually looking forward to each day's update - keep going!
| xx.DIP464.x chapter 5 . 1/30/2009
Aww Edwards adorable and sexy as hell ! lol Please tell me james isnt gonna be a problem. Great job nd update soon, please!