|Reviews for The Red Line|
| Little Miss Whitlock chapter 6 . 1/31/2009
Ah, troubleward, how I love him so... :)
| solidae26 chapter 6 . 1/31/2009
This story is so damn hot! I am practically panting and my husband is giving me weird looks.
I also love the Bella sessions. You're Edward is so lovable and damaged, you're Bella is innoncent and sultry...
It's the best of both worlds!
This is my new favorite story!
| bluebaby3296 chapter 6 . 1/31/2009
u still never said the ages...bellas like 21 but edward is like 28? n e way loving this ch...i wonder what happened in his past...cant wait to find out
| regan117 chapter 6 . 1/31/2009
That was SO HOT. I hope others aren't offended by Edward's actions and words, because I found that even hotter than the seven orgasms! Also, the therapy parts aren't boring. I like learning more about Edward, little by little. Looking forward to more!
| blue.umbrella chapter 6 . 1/31/2009
ohh im am liking this very very much (:
kep it coming please
amazingly awesome story times like a million billion
| chris1210 chapter 6 . 1/31/2009
Awesome chapter. :)
| blackdelia chapter 5 . 1/31/2009
I love your story! Though I have to admit that I like Edward's POV better.
| TukieButterfly13 chapter 5 . 1/31/2009
OMG I LUVED ( WHICH IS BETTER THAN LOVE ) THIS FANFICTION ITS ONE OF THE BEST IVE READ SO FAR AND TRUST ME IVE READ LOTS FANFICTIONS WRITE MORE PLZ
| CB chapter 5 . 1/31/2009
brilliant - keep going!
| Gloryr72 chapter 5 . 1/31/2009
It getting so freaking hot in here this story is so hot and sexy. Where can I find me so sexy Edward like that LOL, LOL keep updating soon!
| kirster226 chapter 5 . 1/31/2009
Wow. I've never read anything like this before. I absolutely love it. I can't wait for Edward's next appointment. I even started tearing up a little bit when she was trying to explain how he wasn't owned by anyone, and especially when he almost called himself a whore. Sad. Please update again soon. Oh, and by the way, I loved the whole reference to theTwilight movie/book. It was awesome! Great job.
| sweetlemongrass chapter 5 . 1/31/2009
I love this, perfect balance of physical and emotional love.
PLEASE keep on writing. Its beautiful
| Syndie chapter 5 . 1/31/2009
Another fantastic story that I have stumbled upon, I love searching until I find something good! Love this,Q's, Will the other cannon couples be introduced as well? I am alerting and favorting, have a great day as you have made mine!
| athena-apollo chapter 5 . 1/31/2009
aw the last two chapters were really good. I especially liked the end of this chapter where she was about to go to school in a CARE BEAR ROBE lol! that was hysterical. well I hope Bella can really help edward I love how your story is going so far.
update soon! oh and SEVEN orgams! Lucky Bella only Edward could pull that off. my how I wish I had a Edward.
| The Naughty Librarian chapter 5 . 1/31/2009
There were several things I loved in this chapter, but my favorite line was this:
"...whenever he’s near me I turn into a quivering heap of stupid."
Looking forward to the next installment. :) ~ Lu