|Reviews for The Red Line|
| MistyD77 chapter 5 . 1/30/2009
Great story! Thanks for updating so often!
| courthale chapter 5 . 1/30/2009
I feel heartbroken for him.
He makes improvements and so does she.
I am so curious as to how this will end.
I hope it's all ends well.
| dominiqueanne chapter 5 . 1/30/2009
loved it, update soon
| vmp1 chapter 5 . 1/30/2009
I love that Bella wants to save him. But can she do it in time before he breaks her heart? Please update soon.
| aliceinthemiddle chapter 5 . 1/30/2009
I'd be in a "DUH" mode too if I had Edward kissing me in my shower first thing in the morning. Pretty awesome story so far. ;)
| bluebaby3296 chapter 5 . 1/30/2009
aw edward cracking up is hysterical...i can pic it too...
| Edward's-a-beefcake chapter 5 . 1/30/2009
This story rocks... it has it all! I love your sense of humor, it really shows when you write. I did a happy dance when I saw this e-mail in my inbox! Cant wait to see waht happens next!
| mspacman1 chapter 5 . 1/30/2009
I am loving it so far. I really hope Bella can help Edward - he's so broken. I loved her leaving in her robe & Edward laughing his ass off at her! That was great!
| colacherry chapter 5 . 1/30/2009
this was so nice seeing bella try to break down edward's walls a bit more. i'm anxious to read their next session.
| flormi chapter 5 . 1/30/2009
i dont like it...i love it! i adore it!
you are amazing!
your story is amazing!
| DrDonnaATX chapter 5 . 1/30/2009
Good Lord you are talented. I adored Hurt and this one...just W O W! Swon... I like this Edwar T!
| PeaceKlaineLove chapter 1 . 1/30/2009
Oh WOW. I LOVE YOUR STORIES! I'm kinda weirded out by this side of Edward but...I like it. I hope Bella sees that he isn't really...enjoying the others. But.. I KNOW YOU LOVE EXB SO, I'LL JUST HAVE TO WAIT I GUESS!
And, though I'd like to THINK I'd be adventurous...I'd probably do the innocent little kiss, just because I don't really like the way the men are put on display like that. (Even though I'm sure most don't mind. Tehe.)
| razorbladcherry chapter 4 . 1/30/2009
good god, that's incredible. i'm at a loss for words. just wow.
| hmr067 chapter 4 . 1/30/2009
i'm in love with this story!
great job ]
| Angels And Airwaves chapter 4 . 1/30/2009
absolutly loved it.
just a question though.
are the eventually going to become a couple?
like i mean later on in the the story?