|Reviews for The Red Line|
| lemonhead67 chapter 6 . 1/31/2009
i love how they were going out for chinese food since i had been craving it all day and had just got some
| writeswithcrayons chapter 6 . 1/31/2009
I was gonna ask about Edward's secret phone calls from the last chapter, but I figured he just called Victoria or something :P
I loved how Anna screamed for her mom, and her mom just says "no way, baby!" hahaha! If I where her ma, I'd be encouraging her.
HAH! Bella wanted to rape him... eh. I would respect him as much as possible, but there's only so much a girl can take, y'know?
Sexy guy dirty talking bye bye respect.
I'm dying to know who he's calling... I wonder if it's the people he grew close to at home... or "his girl"...
| The Naughty Librarian chapter 6 . 1/31/2009
I enjoyed delving deeper into your Edward ~ especially his outburst regarding his parents. While I do admit to reading for the yummy sexin, I am also very much reading for the sessions. ;) ~ Lu
| Angels And Airwaves chapter 6 . 1/31/2009
| MistyD77 chapter 6 . 1/31/2009
Love the chapter! Great story!
| flormi chapter 6 . 1/31/2009
that was PERFECT!
| Jesh chapter 6 . 1/31/2009
MORE MORE MORE!
| dominiqueanne chapter 6 . 1/31/2009
loved it, update soon
| parisgarters chapter 6 . 1/31/2009
Ok, so love the chapter! But I totally laughed out loud when Edward started singing Phantom of the Opera. The first time round in college I was a theatre major and I read the first line and I was like...wait, what? Cause I have totally seen Edward in the place of the Phantom! Love it, you're doing such an awesome job!
| Lil'layah chapter 6 . 1/31/2009
I love rule #1.
Teh sexy! Teh sexy!
| IMCullen chapter 6 . 1/31/2009
Damn i love this story...everyday i wait for the updates like a giddy school girl.
| curlyk03 chapter 6 . 1/31/2009
this story kills me - it's so good!
forget bella, edward is doing quite the number on ME! haha update soon!
| HarryandGinnyeternal chapter 6 . 1/31/2009
Oh poor Edward. I can't believe he went trough all of that, no wonder he's so messed up. The train ride was so HOT. I feel so bad for him but at the same time I'm hopeful that Bella will change him and make him feel better about himself. I love that you update daily if you didn't I don't know if I could stand it.
| forever7twilight chapter 6 . 1/31/2009
This is my absolute favorite story. I cant wait for the next update!
| courthale chapter 6 . 1/31/2009
Damn woman not even a lemon and i'm all hot and bothered. lol
I'm curious about the girl though.
She is definitely the trigger for poor Edward.