|Reviews for The Red Line|
| mischief-maker1 chapter 1 . 1/28/2009
OHH! A friend of mine turned me on to this and I love it! I can't wait to go off and read the next chapter!
| Neferlinde chapter 2 . 1/28/2009
Looks like it is going to be a great story... I'm really intrigued...I read these two chapters yesterday, and I could not stop thinking about the story today... so, please, update soon!
| PurdueLiz chapter 2 . 1/28/2009
God, I find this just fascinating. I'm with Bella, I can't wait to see inside his head and find out why he does this. He'll be in for a surprise when he finds out she's really telling the truth. Can't wait for more!
| PurdueLiz chapter 1 . 1/28/2009
A friend pointed out this story to me and I have to say I'm quite intrigued. I can't wait to see where you're going with it!
| snipits chapter 2 . 1/28/2009
I was intrigued by this premise, and I have to admit, I'm hooked. Please, please, please update soon!
| The Naughty Librarian chapter 1 . 1/28/2009
This story was recommended to me by another fan of your story. Loved Stripward especially that moment with "notebook girl" Bella. I can't wait to see how this progresses. :) Lu
| geekgirlhope chapter 2 . 1/28/2009
Hmm I am very intrigued as to what you are doing here. Edward's psyche seems very broken. I like what you have done so far. Can't wait to see what is next.
| dusk1223 chapter 2 . 1/28/2009
Hi, there! I just wanted to let you know how very, very much I am enjoying this story so far. To be honest, I didn't read it the first couple of times I noticed it-the whole male stripper didn't appeal to me at first. But then I thought "what the hell" and read it. I was so sucked in by your writing style that I couldn't stop.
And now I'm calculating how long it would take me to save up $25,0 to purchase Edward for 2 weeks and what excuse I could use ditch my husband and daughter for those 2 weeks. Bad Dawn!
Keep up the wonderful writing! Please update soon! I'm dying for more!
| InTheClouds773 chapter 1 . 1/28/2009
OMG! I lost it when I read "I am a whore. My name is Edward." I died laughing. I love this story, and I really hope you're able to update this story soon!
| SleepingBedHead chapter 2 . 1/28/2009
Heyy Amazing New Chapter! PUDS I Love This Story XOX
| jitterbug22784 chapter 2 . 1/28/2009
very original. i love the idea. hurry hurry with the next chapter please. :o)
| solarstar17 chapter 2 . 1/28/2009
I LOVE THIS STORY SO FAR! please continue! Edward saying he was a whore kind of upset me :( even though he kind of is one...
| itsmisti chapter 1 . 1/27/2009
this is great so far interesting and humorous hehe
| lildv274 chapter 2 . 1/27/2009
oh man! i really like this story! i havent read one like this yet! it excellent! keep up the goob work... hope you can update soon!
| jpo550 chapter 2 . 1/27/2009
WOW! I would have to say that this is in my top five favorite fanfics ever, and you're only two chapters in! I can't even begin to describe how taken I am with the idea in general and especially your characterization-You have some AMAZING talent and I'm so glad you're sharing it with us! Can't wait for the next chapter!