|Reviews for The Red Line|
| farkaskriszta chapter 40 . 12/15/2014
I just LOVED this story to death. Brilliant!
I am up and read on with the sequel.
| EAMC1992 chapter 40 . 11/15/2014
can you please, at least update your story, THE RED LINE to complete, so that people will know that it is fing done PPPPLLLLEEEEAAAASSSSEEEE!
| EdwardsFirstKiss chapter 29 . 11/14/2014
I just fail to see how people can do this to another person and that person takes it!
I fear she is going to practically kill Edward.
| EdwardsFirstKiss chapter 28 . 11/14/2014
So, I know this is fan fic. But why couldn't Charlie get a search warrant and have Edward take him to the dungeon?
| EdwardsFirstKiss chapter 19 . 11/11/2014
I think his plan is idiotic. I keep thinking that maybe Victoria's family owned the building and they know they are liable for the fire. Why didn't Edward ever sue?
I am hoping that Edward's parents are going to finally step up to the plate when Bella gets through with them.
| EdwardsFirstKiss chapter 16 . 11/10/2014
I hope Bella can somehow get her dad involved in taking Victoria and Raven down.
| EdwardsFirstKiss chapter 15 . 11/10/2014
I hope Bella gets Raven and Victoria somehow. There is no way that Edward can dhopw up at Bel,a's in 3 hours and she will not know something is horribly wrong.
| EdwardsFirstKiss chapter 14 . 11/10/2014
I can't stand Victoria. I have a feeling that Victoria is going to tell Raven to go very hard on Edward. This is not going to be god. I am soooooo scared to read the next chapter!
| EdwardsFirstKiss chapter 13 . 11/10/2014
I am hoping at some point, Edeard's parents will pay for the care of his daughter so he can go back to school. He could take out student loans?
| EdwardsFirstKiss chapter 12 . 11/10/2014
That was hot! So glad that Edeard did not let Bella watch. I am getting very nervous about the Raven chapter. I know it is going to be bad.
This is one of the best Vic's at have read. I think it is the only one where I actually dread reading the next chapter because I am afraid for Edward.
| EdwardsFirstKiss chapter 11 . 11/9/2014
So Tanya was in the blast of the apartment. But, wouldn't the building's insurance provide for her injuries? And why does Edward think it is his fault?
| EdwardsFirstKiss chapter 10 . 11/9/2014
Omg! I hope these two make it to an HEA. Can you imagine what a great relationship they could have?
Had to laugh at Bella being left with her ass in the air. lol!
| EdwardsFirstKiss chapter 9 . 11/9/2014
I feel so badly for Edward. He wanted to be a doctor and is reduced to selling his body for a living. When his parents are Rich!
Not sure what happened to Ayanna buzz take it he took her to his parents for help and they rejected him.
| EdwardsFirstKiss chapter 7 . 11/8/2014
Edward is so heart breakingly sad. They are bot falling for the other, but will not admit it to each other because they are afraid.
I have a feeling that something bad is going to happen with the appointment with Raven and Bella is going to go ballistic.
I have a feeling that Edward is calling his old girlfriend every day at 3 pm. I am thinking that she
is in some sort of care facility and he is paying for her to be there. I could be way off here...
| EdwardsFirstKiss chapter 5 . 11/7/2014
OMG! I was laughing so hard. Edward would turn my brain to mush too.