|Reviews for The Red Line|
| zeeber chapter 25 . 2/5/2013
WOW. all I can say is WOW. You sure do write some powerful words...Brenda
| zeeber chapter 3 . 2/2/2013
I was very worried about reading this story, several people told me how hard it is because of all the hurt...But I pulled up my big girl panties and dived right in. I can't wait to find out what caused Edward to behave the way he does...no one should ever let people to those things to him...just reading that has really pissed me off at whoever is a fault!
thank you for sharing your words...I will continue to read and look for answers...Brenda
| egarbs chapter 4 . 1/29/2013
LOVING this story! Your Edward is amazing and sexy. I am absolutely in love with him ...the good and the sad.
| FanOfFanficionForever chapter 4 . 1/28/2013
OMG! That was so hot! Loved it! Just started reading it, definitely not work computer friendly! Wow! Thanks. ;0
| davey chapter 40 . 1/25/2013
First, sorry if there are any mistakes, english is not my first language.
I just wanted to say you're story was incredible. I laughed and cried, you even had me reading until 5 am the other night. You are an awesome writer, very inspiring. I can't finish this story and not thank you for sharing it. You are very talented and made the story heartbreakingly beautiful and real.
The whole thing with the vampires was very funny, edward's life was breaking my heart every chapter but you were so good you made me keep reading. So thank you and congratulations! you're great!
| OPOSOJOJ chapter 18 . 1/24/2013
Oh man! I need to get myself a master immediately, I want to be a sex slave!
| OPOSOJOJ chapter 12 . 1/21/2013
OMG THAT WAS ABSOLUTELY POSITIVELY ONE OF THE HOTTEST CHAPTERS I'VE EVER READ! I've never really seen the appeal of playing doctor...until now!
| Shades Of Purple84 chapter 9 . 1/18/2013
That was a very healing chapter! I loved it!
| Shades Of Purple84 chapter 8 . 1/18/2013
WOW for a minute there I thought he was gonna be rapped for real! *eyes bulge* I'm glad it was just his job though. Man the scissors were a bit scary for me. Very intense.
| deesirius chapter 26 . 1/16/2013
Wow, Im nervous, but excited!
| wonderfullybedazzled chapter 7 . 1/14/2013
Gah he was 19 when his life turned to shit?
| wonderfullybedazzled chapter 6 . 1/13/2013
What I am guessing is that something happened to the girlfriend and that is his 3 pm call
| wonderfullybedazzled chapter 5 . 1/13/2013
I haven't even started the chapter and I am cracking up the readers did not know who Lewis & Clark were. GAH Stupidity. ...ok ignorance. ...
| wonderfullybedazzled chapter 4 . 1/13/2013
Well I would love for a first time like that...
| wonderfullybedazzled chapter 2 . 1/13/2013
Uh oh wonder how Bella will let him know ... or will he just seduce her into forgetting why she is paying him?