Reviews for The Red Line
Francy Bandeira chapter 1 . 2/22/2015
I read a translation of this story some years ago.. now that I've of know english better I can enjoy it all over again! :D :D #Happy
Guest chapter 1 . 2/16/2015
every time i see or read that fifty shades of grey is based off of twilight/twilight fanfiction, I can't help but to think of this story.
I haven't read any 50sog but I heard that it has a really bad plot/storyline and this ff is the complete opposite. I love, love, love, love, LOVE this and the sequel so much and I love the fact that even though it has BDSM material, you make it CLEAR what's safe and unsafe and that there needs to be aftercare and the like in a healthy relationship.

to hell with that 50shadesofgrey crap
Guest chapter 1 . 2/9/2015
Hey, did You know That people are rewriting your history around Internet? As Justin Bieber? Please, for the love I have for Your Edward and Bella and your history, don't let those people do that! There are histories in English and Portuguese (my native language). Just go to google and put The Red Line with Justin. Please, don't let they do this!
commerou chapter 5 . 2/10/2015
Love this story - you are doing a great job so far...
commerou chapter 1 . 2/9/2015
great start...
Novel's addict chapter 40 . 1/21/2015
Wow i am completely speechless,,, amazing story
Namesse chapter 40 . 1/13/2015
Excellent story, well told!
liz.c.young.7 chapter 40 . 1/11/2015
So much flair in your writing. Thank you so very much!
liz.c.young.7 chapter 9 . 1/9/2015
Beautiful, tender moments in this chapter.
Roza1724 chapter 1 . 1/9/2015
This is really good. I would probably do the same thing as Bella in the cage, I'm super nervous...
Guest chapter 1 . 12/22/2014
FYI I just saw a copy of this posted on tumblr as an Ashton Irwin fanfic. If you want it taken down you may want to look into it
JasmineDragon22 chapter 40 . 12/17/2014
Wow. Captivating from beginning to end. Couldn't put it down. Bravo!
farkaskriszta chapter 39 . 12/15/2014
I just LOVED this story to death. Brilliant!
I am up and read on with the sequel. I am so excited.
farkaskriszta chapter 40 . 12/15/2014
I just LOVED this story to death. Brilliant!
I am up and read on with the sequel.
EAMC1992 chapter 40 . 11/15/2014
can you please, at least update your story, THE RED LINE to complete, so that people will know that it is fing done PPPPLLLLEEEEAAAASSSSEEEE!
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