|Reviews for The Red Line|
| 12121212 chapter 40 . 10/9/2013
Oh god ! Iv'e fineshed this in like a week ! And this is amazing ! Ive criend and that is not something i do ! Absolotly breliant ! ;)
| Just saying chapter 40 . 10/7/2013
Since so many 'Rated M' stories with detailed sex-scenes disappeared in the last days, I'm afraid this story will vanish too. Since I couldn't find it on TWSC, I beg you to save it on another side too.
| dbpbatm chapter 40 . 10/3/2013
Bumpy ride and not for the faint of heart but a good read none the less!
| Colleen Alize chapter 6 . 9/29/2013
Why do i feel like Ed has a secret love child or something? LMAO who is he calling at 3 everyday?! omg i'm going crazy! lol
| MarandaLee chapter 31 . 9/25/2013
I just have to say, I love a good smut filled story that actually has a decent plot, and this story has some juicy action. However, this is one of very few stories where the plot is just as interesting. The grammar and form the story is written in is far above the caliber of 90% of the stories on this site which makes me so happy. You are an amazing writer and I can't wait to read more stories from you. :-)
| SarahCullenxxx chapter 11 . 9/15/2013
Hmm, so is Edward a daddy? Or is it Tanya he is referring to? Great chapter :) x
| Cecelia.Lunette chapter 3 . 9/11/2013
NO NO NO! No Edward play time for Rosalie and Alice!
| kalizivis chapter 40 . 9/4/2013
Wow...this story ia just amazing. It has everything. I was a little put off by thw summary thinking that it would be all fluff and lemons but damn! It is a kick ass story with angst, love, hurt, danger, shame, deception, mystery ...just pure awesomeness!
Thank you, thank you, thank you! So sorry it is over...wish their was a sequel...nudge nudge ...
| kalizivis chapter 35 . 9/4/2013
Really? Charlie ...
| kalizivis chapter 32 . 9/4/2013
Wow what a shit storm!
| kalizivis chapter 31 . 9/4/2013
| nhperryman chapter 9 . 9/4/2013
I am loving this story! Poor Edward, he makes me want to hold him and comfort him and kiss his tears away too. I don't even want to stop reading to write a review, so I have to get back to reading!
| WannabexBlondie chapter 38 . 9/3/2013
I could punch Charlie in the face right now.
| kalizivis chapter 30 . 9/3/2013
Oh i don't think i trust James!
| kalizivis chapter 29 . 9/3/2013
Homicidal thoughts ...no e no!