Reviews for The Red Line
Jasper-replaces-edward chapter 25 . 8/30/2013
Fab. xx
Jasper-replaces-edward chapter 24 . 8/30/2013
blimey yes he is brave. xx
Jasper-replaces-edward chapter 23 . 8/30/2013
Yup that went really
Jasper-replaces-edward chapter 22 . 8/30/2013
Well ok, but Charlie needs to be a star ok? xx
Jasper-replaces-edward chapter 21 . 8/30/2013
nooo, I really like this, it was perfect and fits totally, and would a fab way to get away from Victoria, turn Edward and then he can kill her. xx
Jasper-replaces-edward chapter 20 . 8/30/2013
Yup there is definitely something dodgy going on. And Victoria is all wound up in it too. xx
Jasper-replaces-edward chapter 18 . 8/30/2013
so that would be Ben, or Charlie?. xx
Jasper-replaces-edward chapter 16 . 8/30/2013
Wow, Go Bella. xx
Jasper-replaces-edward chapter 15 . 8/29/2013
hmm shouldnt have read it. xx
Jasper-replaces-edward chapter 14 . 8/29/2013
NO this was a horrible chapter. xx
Jasper-replaces-edward chapter 13 . 8/29/2013
gah .xx
Jasper-replaces-edward chapter 12 . 8/29/2013
Ooh fab, I do have a bit of a rubber glove thing myself.! xx
Jasper-replaces-edward chapter 11 . 8/29/2013
Ooh I think we are about ready to know. xx
Jasper-replaces-edward chapter 9 . 8/29/2013
so, married, what did he do borrow money for something for her, and that was why he was beat up, did they beat her up? is he paying for her care? at one point I thought she was in prison, when he said they got married at the station. love it. xx
Jasper-replaces-edward chapter 8 . 8/29/2013
Oh dear poor Edward. but he needs the money for hospital bills? hmm, and he said he carried her to her parents and they shut the door. So not good for him. xx
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