|Reviews for The Red Line|
| Jasper-replaces-edward chapter 7 . 8/29/2013
Gah they so lovely. xx
| Jasper-replaces-edward chapter 6 . 8/29/2013
Lol he was a fab cop stripper. He is so sweet and damaged. xx
| Shelljayz chapter 35 . 8/28/2013
First, I have to say I love this story and your writing is awesome. I wish I had found this story a long time ago. I am a bit confused though. In the last chapter (34), you had Renee as Charlie's ex wife on the road with Phil and Bella didn't want to call her and tell her about Charlie's leg or any of their ordeal. But in this chapter Renee died from breast
cancer when Bella was young. ? Again I love this story. So detailed and thought out, can't wait to finish it and read more of your writing.
| Jasper-replaces-edward chapter 5 . 8/28/2013
Ah he is so messed up. xx
| Jasper-replaces-edward chapter 4 . 8/28/2013
What a lovely chap he is. xx
| Jasper-replaces-edward chapter 3 . 8/27/2013
Nope she needs to keep him for herself. so sad. xx
| Jasper-replaces-edward chapter 2 . 8/27/2013
Blimey I think Bella might be in for a shock xx
| Jasper-replaces-edward chapter 1 . 8/27/2013
oh dear, poor Edward. xx
| tillthedeath chapter 9 . 8/18/2013
omg so love this making a story soon hope you read it love twilight fever
| tilunarou chapter 25 . 8/10/2013
waouh! This chapter was frightenning and sad! :(
Hope Edward is to live better days soon.
| maphie chapter 40 . 8/7/2013
Read this story over a period of 3 days. It was rough going for some of the parts but I couldn't put it down. Thanks for sharing!
| bookworm1234 chapter 40 . 8/5/2013
The beggining to middle relationship between Edward and bella reminds me of the son 'demons' by imagine dragons
| Guest chapter 14 . 8/1/2013
I really don't like Victoria, not at all. Can you kill her please? Drunk Bella is very funny. Poor Edward. I am loving this story so far. I really don't want to see Raven.
| Hannah chapter 24 . 7/31/2013
Amazing story love it
| Guest chapter 14 . 7/27/2013
You are an amazing writer... The depth of the character development is needed for a story like this
.. You're amazing.