|Reviews for The Red Line|
| tilunarou chapter 6 . 7/26/2013
The cop stripper was REALLY hot? Do you want me to die?!
That was an awesome chapter and I like the way you make the 2 of them go on little by little...
Reading next chapters right now...
| tilunarou chapter 1 . 7/24/2013
I've been recommended your fic by some friends and they were right, it's awesome.
| TheRandomGal42 chapter 40 . 7/22/2013
| Miss Jordan chapter 1 . 7/21/2013
I really loved your story and have included a link for it on my tumblr fanfiction page recommending it for people to read. I hope that's okay? Thanks so much for a good read, it was well written and gripping!
| Cole Mc chapter 16 . 7/14/2013
Will you put Raven in a burning building with Victoria? Maybe locked in the basement...
| Guest chapter 40 . 7/9/2013
i loved it! charlie made me cry! keep writing great stories and good luck :)
| Guest chapter 25 . 7/7/2013
im so sorry im late on reading your story but let me just say "wow"! ive never cried hard in my life like that. This chapter was very deep and strong and so full of emotion. Your a very gifted writer and i hope you finish this story because its amazing.
| LesleyLunaCullen chapter 40 . 7/7/2013
Loved this story & am stoked 4 the sequel! ! U had me scared, laughing, crying, & horny b (lol)! Where's my Edward to fix (lol)
| Bbg03 chapter 8 . 7/3/2013
Lol i read the first part of this chapter listenimg to bless the broken road and it was perfect.
| sueparkinson7 chapter 27 . 6/23/2013
I'm so taken in by this story , I can't stop reading it. And now I can't stop crying. He's gone back to Victoria, to God know what torture. I love your story, thanks for sharing it with us. I hope Edward won't have to suffer for long, and I'm hoping that as well as stopping Victoria something bad happens to Raven too. Got yo get back to Edward and Bella now.
| robsten-and-hartsquaredbig chapter 13 . 6/23/2013
VICTORIA IS SUCH A FUCKING BITCH.
| ForeverLobsters chapter 40 . 6/17/2013
This story was an emotional roller coaster but I loved the ride! Looking forward to reading the sequel.
| edla chapter 30 . 6/16/2013
I also have to share with you that u know how to write HOT lemons let me tell u wheew! they had me bothered lol I hope u continue with your lemons that way and I think itd be a fuck hot movie !
| edla chapter 36 . 6/16/2013
lmao! I loved the sex on the banister and I love how she dragged him in through the door lol I soo could picture that and then Edward busting gut that's how rob and Kristen is in rea life too its like u are writing their story and they don't even know it! lol I laughed so hard I just love it and I love how comical they are especially when it came to showtime it reminded me of a partner and crime movie and I laughed how they joked one minute serious the next lol
| Amy chapter 40 . 6/14/2013
Great story, fascinating- it held me all 40 chapters. Wonderful!