Reviews for Odd Couple
zolly007 chapter 51 . 5/12/2018
What a disappointment! However, the author has the right to his own view of complex things that constitute the essence of our world)) Written perfectly! Weakly Prowl's character and the fatality of his relationship with Lockdown - that's probably what touches the most. I can not wish him luck with Jazz (I do not like him - for me, Jazz is too simple - like a coin in half a crown) ... and yet - damnit would have taken such a dull nauseous end of story. author- it would be better- to kill fucking bandit,))) so so so much better...
zolly007 chapter 37 . 5/12/2018
how you doing love this shit, Lock? fuck it, why me never met with you? with nobody like you? little piece of shit - so lucky. why me so angry, why?
zolly007 chapter 36 . 5/12/2018
pathetic lousy prowl. You pathetic rotten thing! I hat you! so weakly! damn you! the bit piece of shit)))
Dreamer Red Streak chapter 25 . 11/7/2017
"You, sir, are a rat-bastard son of a withholding bitch, sir," IS THAT A M*A*S*H REFERENCE? :O :D
Dreamer Red Streak chapter 50 . 9/2/2017
*Sobs extreamly hard while having Heathers; the musical flashback* Noooooooooooo! not again! XD great fic, i thoughtfully loved every minuet of it! :)
Komiv chapter 50 . 1/26/2015
I'm not sure if I ever actually left a review for this fic or not, so leaving one (or another one) in case I haven't to correct that grave error. Because..goddamn. Every time I read this fic it suckerpunches me in the gut with feels (in a good way), and your writing is just really easy to read. I'm regretting not noting some parts as I was reading, but more than once I paused reading just because a particular line or set of lines just sounded really good. I love how well you develop all the characters into dynamic individuals, and brought so much emotion into the whole story.

And... "Regardless of how it ended, I realize it was what I needed at the time." That line means a lot to me, so thank you for that.
Fireworks chapter 51 . 12/27/2014
I have to say this is one of the most amazing fanfiction I read I just think this was mind blowing your so highly skilled in detail when your writing and you had such an amazing plot all the way thro with its s big achievement when u have s fic as long as this.

I loved this human AU I loved the characters human appearance and your own twist from the show and I loved how in the end u mixed G1 into it as well.

U wrote the suggels they went thro so well and how they came to solve them and what they learnd at the end.

The ending really suits this story and for me it's bittersweet I don't mind JazzXprowl (prowlXjazz?) but when u read this all the way though Focusing on one main couple u can't help but think MAYBE they could still be togather but noo because like u say not all story's end happily .

Am gonna read Odd moments next the reason why I never read it at the same time was to really help me figure Out were it all fits into the time line with this story.

I know it's been quite a few years since u wrote this but weather your still not got the time to write a full-plan squeal for this story on here or your dead...or don't like writing no more...I would love for the squeal to be posted on here (even so I will still read from your live Journal) to see what's the next chapter will bring for prowl...(and deep down hope prowl&Lockdown encounter again ...hehe..)

Sorry for the long review (witch I hope u get to see because like I said its been a few years since u finshed this story and I don't know if people still review this much) but I just had so much to say about this story
Thanks for the amazing story-fireworks
Lanny-Sama chapter 51 . 9/19/2014
Got some real emotion shaken loose in me a few chapters back, You hit the mark.
Bubblegumblue06 chapter 50 . 7/2/2014
Oh you are just the worst type of dare you play with my emotions...I just balled like a baby! Uncool...amazing but uncool... *cries in corner*
beiber4evaaahhhh chapter 11 . 3/31/2014
Very interesting.
This story, that is.
I'm not quite certain I like to entertain the thought of Prowl being,

But this story is very well written for a Humanized: AU, which there needs to be more of.
All in all, an interesting read.
ROT chapter 51 . 8/26/2013
pe...pero... Yo queria que lockdown y prowl terminaran juntos TTATT
dime que haras un final alternativo donde terminaran juntos porfavor
Volto chapter 26 . 10/14/2012
Heh, I'm reading this again...still amazing, BUT WHERE'S THE BIG PEOPLES WEBSITE!?
Catzan chapter 51 . 9/9/2012
...Holy mother of... That was one of the best fanfics I have read on this site. You had a good plot, great twists (I actually thought Lockdown was going to die...), little to no error in grammar, very natural relationships, and fantastic character development (o.c.s included(I loved Torque! And I usually hate femmes.)) But for me, the thing that really got me is that this fic made me feel so much emotion... Happiness, excitment, fear, anger (Especially with Prowl's dick of a father. Seriously, I wanted to smack him with a bible for hours on end.), love, and sadness. I kid you not, I cried about three times in a row with chapter 48 and 49. When I would calm myself and start reading again, thinking everything would be better, I would read something sadder still and bawl my fricking eyes out. And honestly, when I feel such strong waves of empathy for fictional characters, I have to commend you for such great story telling. Thanks for posting your work for the world to see and for making this girl hunger for Lockdown/Prowl even stronger than before.
Guest chapter 6 . 6/30/2012
Holy sh- Are you kidding me?
Of ALL the goddamn books to pick from the list... . They'll never let me live this down.
Guest chapter 5 . 6/30/2012
...Jingle jingle?
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