|Reviews for Breakfast at Tiffany's The Original Oneshot|
| CocoaSampson chapter 1 . 1/26/2009
This has got to be one of the sweetest things I've read in a long time. It definitely doesn't hurt that this has great grammar and writing ability as a whole. Marvelous job, and I'm definitely voting for this for the challenge!
| ninapolitan chapter 1 . 1/26/2009
I say this sincerely and honestly. I don't want to enter this contest now. I had every intention of it but I can't now.
Throughout the entire story, I leaned into the computer constantly checking the sidebar silently praying that it wasn't nearly over. This was wonderful, seamless for having two authors and perfect. I wish you the best of luck in this contest and you will have my vote ;)
| forsakenphoenix1 chapter 1 . 1/26/2009
This was lovely. You both did a magnificent job and it flowed so wonderfully that you would never be able to tell you wrote it round-robin style. I love the sincerity behind both Bella and Edward's actions and words, their quiet desperation for that infinite love. Just...really, really nice work. :)