Reviews for Breaking Away
Angel Nat-Chan chapter 1 . 12/1/2009
I have to say I loved this, especially your choice of song - it REALLY suits Harry. There's just a couple of things I would pick fault with, you got the lyric order slightly wrong, it should be 'walking in your shoes (caught in the undertow, just caught in the undertow) etc.' and the three lines from 'i've become so tight' are the rest of the chorus. That and the perspective goes from third person to 'I' after Harry begins signing. Other than that, it's great.
Atrum.Decor chapter 1 . 5/26/2009
WO! *Cheers and asks for an encore!* Damn! I realyy hope you make this into an actual fic'. This one-shot would actually make an awesome prologue to a story. _;

AND FINALLY! Someone else realizes how much that song could go with Harry. Lol. Despite that not making any sense, *AWESOME* song choice!
Maria Dreamwalker chapter 1 . 5/25/2009
wow, a hot-sounding Potter! nice. great job!
slmncpm chapter 1 . 1/26/2009
oh i LOVE this.. please make it a story instead of just a one shot...please?